Outside of Invrisil, a battle was being fought between an army of Goblins and an army of Humans. The cold, muddy ground was warmed with blood and fresh bodies. Both sides struggled against each other, shouting, and the clash of arms filling the air. The battle had been long. The battle had been short.

To Osthia Blackwing, held captive in the heart of the Goblin army, it felt as though the battle had gone on for a week, and yet, at the same time, it had felt like it had rushed by in the course of minutes. She estimated that the true length was just over two hours. She had been forced to watch it all, as Goblins crashed into the ranks of Humans with their undead allies.

Crashed and broke. Despite their superior numbers, the thousands of elite Hobs and the presence of the undead, the Goblins had failed to overwhelm the Human army time and time again. And indeed, they had been forced back, humbled by one figure who had made the battlefield swirl around him.

Zel Shivertail.

Now Osthia watched him streak back across the battlefield, carried by a pink magical carriage that scythed across the Goblin front-line, running down any Goblin careless enough to get in its way. She was not the only one with her attention on the Drake [General]. The Goblin Lord sat astride his massive Shield Spider mount, staring at Zel Shivertail with narrowed eyes. He spoke, his voice filled with hatred and frustration.

“Why is he so strong?”

Silence greeted his question. The Goblin Lord’s lieutenants stood around him. Eater of Spears, Snapjaw, the Goblin [Beastmaster]…none could say it aloud. Their numbers had been cut down by Zel already. Now the Goblin Lord’s eyes turned to Osthia. She glared at him, her mouth gagged.

“What is he doing?”

Coming for you. She glared, her jaw working against the tight leather strips holding her mouth shut. The Goblin Lord nodded. He stared at Zel, and then turned to his lieutenants.

“Prepare. He is coming.”

The Goblins shuddered. He was coming. The hero of the Antinium Wars, the famous [General of the Line], the Tidebreaker. Those titles had been just words before. Now they were all too real. The Goblin Lord’s army was superior to the Human one, but the Goblin Lord had yet to meet Zel Shivertail on the field of battle. Now that was going to change.

Osthia could feel it. Zel Shivertail was not the kind of [General] who would risk a prolonged battle against the Goblin Lord, whose army was matched against his. He was coming.

She hoped he knew he was walking into a trap.




Faces. That was what you saw in a battlefield. Faces. Even if you didn’t want to—at close range, that was all you could see. You saw the enemy as you gutted them with your claws or with a sword. Their faces, sometimes covered beneath helmets, sometimes full of hate or despair. It was easy to see only the enemy in them, but it was strange how there was a person behind each [Soldier]’s face. The Goblins looked like people sometimes.

Zel Shivertail gripped the side of Magnolia Reinhart’s carriage, feeling the wind blasting off his scales. He saw the battlefield flash by him. Hundreds, thousands of faces turned his way. Human [Soldiers], cheering as they saw the Drake [General] flash by, Goblins, drawing back in fear and hatred. Zel glanced ahead and saw Reynold driving the coach with minute flicks of the reins. The [Butler]’s face was pallid and his hands shook a bit, but he was still upright, still driving with impeccable accuracy.

“Good man.”

Zel waited until he saw his target in the crowd. Another man who stood out in the sea of armored bodies. The [Chevalier] Thomast fought in a doublet of red and gold cloth, much of which had been stained a deeper crimson still by blood. Not his. The clothing was probably enchanted, but Thomast had yet to take a blow. The [Duelist] and [Chevalier] fought with rapid thrusts and lunges that took down his opponents before they could strike. He turned as Zel leapt, scattering enemies and allies with his landing.

“Get ready to execute the plan! Turn and pick me up!”

Zel roared at Reynold and saw the coach speed off and turn—into the Goblin lines. Again the green-skinned monsters scattered, screaming and crying out in pain and horror as the carriage crushed them mercilessly.

Monsters. People. Zel turned his head and looked at Thomast. The [Duelist] was breathing heavily, but like Zel, he was ready to fight. They were the highest-level warriors on the field, or so Zel sensed. Funny, he didn’t know if he’d ever said more than a few words to the man.

“I’m turning over control of the left flank to you! Hold your ground or we’ll be overrun!”

“Leave it to me.”

Thomast nodded as Zel pointed, shouting over the roar of Humans and Goblins clashing. There were a thousand things that he could have said. The [Duelist] could have pointed out his lack of experience or Skills in battlefield command, the dangers of turning over strategy to someone else, or simply asked what Zel was doing. He did none of those things and instead turned his attention back to the battle. Zel was grateful. He ran forwards, cut down a charging Hob with a slash of his claws, leapt—and caught hold of the carriage as it streaked by the other way.

Three Goblins had grabbed on as well and had been crawling towards Reynold with daggers in hand. They took one look at Zel and let go. Zel saw their bodies disappear into the mass of Goblins as the coach turned. He gritted his teeth as he pulled himself closer to the front. All the pieces were in a row.

“Let’s do this. You ready?”

Reynold nodded. The [Butler] flicked the reins and the two spoke at once. Reynold uttered a command as the carriage sped towards the edge of the battle.

“[Flying Wheels]!”

Zel felt the coach lift up, and felt his stomach drop. He ignored the sensation and raised one claw.

“[Rapid Maneuvering]! [Hold the Line]! [Vanguard of Steel]!”

He felt the Skills take hold on the Human army below him immediately. Zel looked down as Humans changed formations, obeying orders he had given. Below him, the battlefield began to shift.




“What’s he doing?”

From her vantage point apart from the battle, Magnolia Reinhart saw the established lines of battle break and Human [Soldiers] adopt a strange formation. They pushed past the undead and Goblins, encircling them from the right with cavalry and infantry alike crashing into the Goblin formations. A thin wave of Human [Soldiers] trapped the Goblins from the right, but so few that they were a single line compared to the green mass that began pushing back against them.

“That cannot be sound strategy. Sacra? What is General Shivertail thinking?”

“He used a Skill. [Vanguard of Steel]—can’t you feel it?”

Sacra turned her head, breathing heavily. Magnolia frowned and pinched herself.

“No, I can’t.”

I can. General Shivertail’s Skill is—look!”

Sacra pointed. Magnolia saw the thin wave of Humans that should have been immediately overwhelmed by the Goblin numbers holding their ground, roaring as they traded blows with the Goblins. She saw a young woman in armor take a sword strike to her unguarded neck. But rather than drop, the sword bounced off her skin.

Steel bodies. Magnolia’s eyes widened.

“I say, how long will the effects last?”

“Not too long. But they don’t need to.”

Indeed, the Goblins were in disarray as their opponents suddenly became immortal foes, almost impervious to harm. They drew back, and Magnolia saw another strange event take place. Pink, armored [Knights] began striding across the battle lines, hacking their way through Goblins, spacing themselves out across the center and left flank where the undead were pushing at the Human [Soldiers].

“He’s broken up my Knights of the Petal again. What is he doing? The Goblin Lord will begin attacking them again.”

Bethal stared as her Rose Knights began pushing the Goblin lines back. Magnolia glanced up, towards a flying carriage moving across the battlefield.

“I believe the Goblin Lord is about to have his hands full, Bethal.”

Every head looked up. They saw the pink carriage flying over the Goblin Lord’s army. A black bolt rose to meet it. Magnolia’s hands clenched as she saw Reynold frantically swerve to avoid it. But then they saw the carriage dip, and dive. A second lance of death magic shot forwards—a clawed hand blocked it. Zel Shivertail clung to the side of the carriage. He was right over the Goblin Lord’s head now. Magnolia saw his arm tense—then he let go and dropped.




A hundred feet. Fifty feet. Twenty. The ground—

Zel landed with an impact that knocked the wind out of him. The thud was more like an explosion. He could feel dirt fountaining up around him, feel the crushing pain of impact. For a second the Drake lay there, stunned. Then he moved.

Up Zel rose. A claw shot out and slashed a Hob who’d tried to swing at him, thinking Zel would be too slow to react. Zel felt his claws shear through the Hob’s armor and flesh like parchment. He withdrew his hand and the Hob fell.

Goblins. Zel stood and looked around. There were thousands of them, all staring at him. Many had open-mouths. Some were still staring at Reynold as the [Butler] carried his carriage out of danger. They were stunned, unable to believe Zel had survived the fall.

Strength. Zel’s body hurt a tiny bit from the fall. But he had fallen further and survived. He’d fallen off a cliff once. And the danger of dropping into the middle of an army of Goblins? Zel had fought against Drakes, Humans, Antinium—all without more than basic steel armor and his claws. What was this compared to fighting a Drake Lord of the Wall?

And yet, they stared as if he were the monster. Zel wanted to laugh at them. They were afraid of him for surviving a fall from the sky? This was normal. This was what high-level battles were like. The first breath of air in Zel’s lungs was sweet. He inhaled, and then roared.

Goblin Lord!

His voice caused a hush across the battlefield. Zel turned, staring around for the Goblin Lord’s figure, or that of his spider. He saw neither. The Goblins were moving to surround him. Where was the Goblin Lord? Zel twisted around again as he heard a voice.

“General Shivertail!”

Someone was shouting his name. And the voice—Zel saw a bound shape. A Drake with bright yellow scales was fighting on the ground, her arms and legs bound.

A Drake? Zel stared, shocked. She was an Oldblood Drake. A captive? She’d managed to loosen a leather muzzle on her mouth. Now she screamed at him.

“It’s a trap! Get away, sir! The Goblin Lord—”

She turned and sprayed acid from her mouth at a Hob. He screamed in agony and another clubbed her down from behind with a mace. Zel looked around. All he saw were Hobs. And they had enchanted weapons, wands, bows—

The first arrow Zel blocked on an arm. The other eight glanced off his scales. The bolt of lightning made his side tingle and ache, but his armor caught most of the magic. The Drake turned and caught a sledgehammer blow to the side. He grabbed the Hob who’d hit him and pressed his claws into the Hob’s eyes. Digging deep. She screamed and died.

Turn. A sword slashed across Zel’s face. He felt the tip cutting through his outer scales, drawing a line of blood. An enchanted blade. Zel twisted before it could keep cutting and lashed out. Another killing blow. The Goblins stared as two Hobs fell. Zel wiped the blood from his scales and looked around.

Goblins all around. They closed in, their faces afraid, staring. Zel laughed and spread his arms wide.

For Izril! Sserys and the Drakes!

They were afraid to come to him, so he went to them. Zel charged alone, into the ranks of the Goblins. He cut them down, trying to find a single figure in the midst of the army.

Where was the Goblin Lord?





Sacra breathed the word, her eyes wide. Magnolia saw the blaze of golden-red armor, the sole Drake in the center of the Goblin’s army. Zel Shivertail was a whirlwind, cutting Hobs down as they rushed him from every angle.

It was a sight to motivate the Human army, which was pushing back the Goblins, riding on the momentum of their [Vanguard of Steel] effect. And yet, Magnolia felt nothing but anxiety as she stared into the heart of the battle.

“Where is the Goblin Lord? General Shivertail is alone.”

No one answered. Bethal, Sacra, and the other servants were transfixed, staring at Zel. Magnolia looked around and then kicked Bethal in the rear. The other woman stumbled.


“Stop gaping and look, Bethal! If the Goblin Lord escapes then General Shivertail will be well and truly cut off. I don’t think Reynold can get back to him!”

It was true. The pink carriage was under attack as Goblins loosed arrows and spells at it. Magnolia knew that the carriage wasn’t that invulnerable—the enchantments might well be breaking. Reynold was already trying to steer it away from the battlefield. She kicked Sacra and gave the same order.

Find the Goblin Lord! We are the only ones who can look!”

The other servants and Bethal turned their gaze to the battlefield. Magnolia stared through the sea of Goblins, trying to connect the Goblin Lord’s visage to the milling crowd of Goblins. It was damnably hard—and not least because the Goblins did look alike at this distance! And yet, he had to be out there. If only she could find out where before he escaped completely. Zel Shivertail had been nearly on top of him and the Goblin Lord couldn’t have moved that far—

A swirl in the army caught her attention. Magnolia saw the Goblins moving slightly, eddying around something. The [Lady]’s eyes narrowed. She was no battlefield expert, but she’d seen more than one ballroom where one person was at the center of attention. She was the attention most of the time.


Bethal had seen the same thing. She pointed a finger and Magnolia saw the Goblin Lord. He was dismounted, leading his Shield Spider away through a screen of Hobs. He hadn’t gone more than fifty feet in the chaos and he was moving slowly, confident that Zel couldn’t spot him through the waves of Goblins surrounding him.

What arrogance. For a second Magnolia could almost admire his casual retreat. Then she smiled and a glint appeared in her eyes.

“A shame you and I will never meet in the realm of politics. You might have done better there than on the battlefield.”

Sacra glanced at Magnolia, only having heard the last of what her mistress had said. She stared at the Goblin Lord, her hands clenched on her mace.

“There he is. But how can we get General Shivertail’s attention?”

“Oh, that’s quite simple.”

Magnolia’s fingers raised and she carefully flicked her hand at Zel Shivertail as he cut down another Hob with his claws. She pitched her voice so and tilted her hand as if she was cupping his chin in her hand. She turned her hand and whispered.

Look over there.

Across the battlefield Zel Shivertail’s head turned. Magnolia saw his body jerk and his eyes widened. He stared for a second and then charged into a Hob who was running at him. The Drake lifted one hand as he used the Hob as a shield. One hand, raised in thanks. Then he was charging. And she heard his voice.

Turn and face me, coward!

And the Goblin Lord turned. There was only a hundred feet separating the two as Zel Shivertail and the Goblin Lord locked eyes. The Goblin motioned and a wall of Goblins surged forwards. Zel Shivertail roared and charged.


Magnolia’s voice was distant but the two War Golems heard. They raised their heads and abandoned their posts, charging into the Goblin army and heading for the Goblin Lord. She heard Bethal shouting at her Rose Knights and saw them slicing into the army. Suddenly, the Goblins were trying to hold back pink [Knights] and a pair of armored giants and Zel Shivertail himself. All headed straight for the Goblin Lord.

To his credit, he held his ground. The Goblin Lord refused to run. He mounted his Shield Spider and began firing black bolts of magic at Zel Shivertail. The Drake absorbed the magic, letting it splash over his enchanted armor, dodging others. Charging.

Unstoppable! The Goblins tried to block him with spears, grabbing at the General, throwing their bodies in front of him. But nothing worked. Zel came on, roaring, and Magnolia saw a pair of Goblins moving forwards to stop him.




He was coming. Snapjaw’s mouth was dry with fear as she heard Zel Shivertail roaring. He was cutting a path through her people like they were made of grass! And he was heading to the Goblin Lord, her hope, the hope of her people.

He had to be stopped. She ran forwards with Eater of Spears. The two Hobs were ready to die to stop the Drake. Snapjaw raised her enchanted sword.

“Go left!”

She screamed at Eater of Spears. He roared and charged towards the Drake’s left. Snapjaw ran right. She could stab him from behind. She’d poisoned this blade. All she needed was one good strike and—

Snapjaw’s legs carried her past Zel Shivertail as he spun to face both her and Eater of Spars. Snapjaw blinked, tried to turn, and failed. She ran past the Drake [General], unable to turn. It was as if someone was holding her in place! And then she heard a voice.

A Human woman’s voice. It whispered in her ears.

This way, my dear.

Snapjaw fought against the voice, tried to slow her legs. But the voice was powerful and it held her. For three seconds. That was all. But in the time it was too late. Snapjaw turned, weeping, and saw the end.




There he was. The Goblin Lord was sitting across his giant Shield Spider, only a few paces in front of Zel. The Drake [General] clenched his fists.

A huge Hob blocked his way. Zel looked up as Eater of Spears blocked his path. The Hob was a giant. His face was set, his eyes locked on Zel’s face. The two paused for a second as Goblins drew back, seeing one of their heroes facing the Drake [General].

Zel spoke.

“You can’t stop me.”

Eater of Spears paused. He stared at Zel, his face solid, grim, unflinching. He spoke, a bass rumble.

“Can try.”

He charged forwards, fist swinging fast. Zel leapt forwards as well and the two met in a clash of fist and claw. The Drake [General] slipped around the Hobgoblin’s fist and slashed left-right across Eater of Spears’ chest. He tore the Hob’s front open but the Goblin refused to fall. Bleeding, his body staining crimson, he lashed out and hit Zel in the chest with a mighty punch.

The Drake grunted and spun with the impact. He slashed again—this time Eater of Spears made a sound like a groan and Zel’s claws bounced off bone. His ribs. Flesh sundered, the Hob was too slow. Zel sprinted past him and Eater of Spears fell backwards, grasping weakly for the last healing potion at his belt. Only, Zel had crushed it sometime during the exchange of blows.


There was one last wall of Hobs between him and the Goblin Lord. Zel counted. Six—four—three—two—

The last two Hobs fell back, fighting furiously, until they heard a voice. They moved backwards, and Zel saw the Goblin Lord staring down at him. The Goblin was tall as a normal Human man, and proportioned in much the same way. He was no giant, no inhumanly large monster. But then, Velan hadn’t been either.

This Goblin was no Goblin King. But he still faced Zel, unafraid. His hands grasped a black blade of magic. He pointed it at Zel and the [General] opened his crimson claws. They stared at each other for a second.

And then Zel charged. He roared as he came, and in the distance the Human army screamed and shouted. The Goblin Lord charged, and the Goblins around him howled defiance.

The Shield Spider lashed out at Zel, trying to trap him with its legs, biting. The Goblin Lord swung—Zel ducked under both black and legs and found the Shield Spider’s belly. He cut into its center and tore pieces of carapace from its body.

The Shield Spider screamed. It bled as Zel dodged back, a pale blue ichor. The Goblin Lord raised his finger and shot a blast of death magic at Zel. The [Deathbolt] pierced Zel at point-blank range. He stumbled. But did not fall.

“Not enough. [Titan’s Cut]!”

Zel raised his claws and slashed. The arc of his claws traced through the air, and the air itself bent as he cut. An imprint of four claw marks opened up across the Shield Spider’s entire body and it screamed. The massive strike severed one of its legs, crushed another at the base and opened up its bulbous abdomen. The giant spider collapsed in a bloody pool and the Goblin Lord tumbled from its back. Zel walked forwards, claws ready.

The Goblin Lord had fallen behind his spider’s abdomen, out of view. Zel walked around the side, trying to get a good look. He saw a foot—then the Goblin Lord. The Goblin rose, pointing at Zel’s chest—

“[Bone F—]”

[Antimagic Slash]!

Zel’s claws went through a barrier of magic and into the Goblin Lord’s side. He tore—the Goblin Lord screamed as Zel ripped his stomach open.

Blood, red and wet, splashed to the ground. The Goblin Lord stared down at his open stomach and then up at Zel.


That was all he said. It was such a normal word. Zel nodded. He stepped forwards, his claws open.

Goblins screamed as they saw their leader fall. They swarmed Zel. He turned and cut them down. Regular soldiers, fighting a [General]. He was five steps away from the Goblin Lord.








Do it!

Gershal of Vaunt screamed the words as he carried Salvia away from her downed mount. His voice joined thousands of others. The Humans roared, cheering.

“Finish him.”

Magnolia clenched her hands as she saw Zel cutting down Goblins left and right. They were all over him, leaping on the General’s back, trying to hold him back—trying to save their Lord. But Zel stepped forwards. He was close. So close. She saw his claws raise—

And then a pillar of white blocked her view. Magnolia blinked. She saw something—a yellowish-white thing—erupt from the ground. A pillar? No, more like a spike of ivory. A wall of bone. Magnolia stared.

And then she saw another. A spire of bone shot out of the ground, implaling a Hob and two smaller Goblins. More bone pillars began rising out of the ground in a circle around Zel and the Goblin Lord. They grew like obscene flowers, stained red with the Goblins they impaled, raising higher, higher—

“Magnolia. What’s happening?”

Bethal stared at the bone walls as they knitted together, forming a dome in the middle of the battlefield. A circular wall of ivory engulfed Zel and the Goblin Lord, blocking them from view from every direction. Magnolia stared. Bethal looked from her to Sacra, her face pale.

“Is it a spell or—”

“I don’t know.”

Magnolia whispered. Her heart was suddenly beating very fast. She stared at the dome of bone. It couldn’t be the work of the Goblin Lord. If he could cast that spell he would have done so before Zel reached him. But if not him, then there could be only one other person who cast the spell.


And now Magnolia truly felt afraid. She stared at the ivory wall as Goblins began to bang on the impenetrable bone with their weapons. She turned to Sacra.

Get me all the [Mages] you can find! Open that dome now!




Zel twisted as he saw the bone spires rising from the ground. He saw the Goblin Lord’s eyes widen, and felt that sense of unease at the back of his mind spike into bells of alarm. He turned, ignoring the Goblin Lord, and saw the walls of bone close, obscuring the sky overhead. Suddenly, everything was dark.

Only his enchanted breastplate shed any kind of light in the enclosed space. Zel eyed the smooth ivory walls, wondering if he could break them. Then he felt…something.

Magic. It was a palpable presence at times, when great spells were cast. Zel could feel it being concentrated here, a tingling on his scales. He looked around and saw the air shimmer.

It wasn’t a tear in space, or a portal. It was more like a bridge or an—opening—that someone stepped through. The air twisted, and a shape stepped out of the shadows. Zel saw a bone-white woman, no a woman made of bone, a giant wearing bone armor and holding a sword and shield step out. She stared at him with green eyes that blazed with undead light.

And she spoke. One word.


The air moved. Zel turned and saw more shadows flickering, becoming people. Four more figures stepped into place. A skeleton of black bone, dressed in a [Mage]’s robes. The flames in her eyes glowed gold as she twirled the staff in her hand.


A woman, a rotting corpse walked out to Zel’s left. By her side, a strange figure dressed in a trench coat, a humanoid creature with no face, features concealed by a hat.  The rotting undead spoke for both of them.

“Bea. And Oom.”

And the last, a Gnoll dressed in armor. His eyes glowed blue. His body was dead, but for the light in his eyes he might have been alive. He was powerful, taller than Zel, and he had a sword that glowed with magic in one hand. He spoke last, his voice deep, booming in the enclosed space.


The five undead stood in the dome. Zel’s heart was pounding in his chest. He stared from face to face. They had entered this place with a spell. Not [Invisibility]. He would have sensed it. No, the spell, the way they seemed to appear—[Teleport]? [Greater Teleport]? They had to have used an artifact.

There was no time to ask what was happening. No reason to either, really. Zel looked from face to face, and focused on Kerash. The undead Gnoll raised his sword and pointed at Zel’s chest.

“Surround the Drake.”

The five undead moved around the dome, trying to flank him. Zel backed up until his back was at one of the bone walls. Bea and Oom took his left side, while Venitra and Ijvani his right. Kerash stood in front of him. The five undead readied themselves, waiting. Zel eyed them as he shifted, his stance low, his claws open.

Five. Each undead was clearly unique. They all radiated danger, but—he appraised them quickly.

Venitra, the undead bone woman was clearly some kind of [Knight]. She looked like a kind of golem. Dangerous, but not unbeatable. The skeleton by her side—the way she held her staff reminded Zel of something. Had he met her before? She was a spellcaster, but that too was manageable.

The real threat was coming from Zel’s left. He had no idea what the rotten ‘Bea’ could do, but all his instincts screamed at him not to let her touch him. As for Oom—Zel risked a glance and saw a featureless, smooth face. Oom’s body was black, almost translucent, and the way he stood—the trench coat and hat were concealing something. He had no face. Was he even humanoid?

Kerash was the last. Zel thought he was a Draugr of some kind. They were powerful, hard to kill and strong, but it was only the enchanted sword that could hurt him. Get rid of that and—

Too many. Zel knew he was tired, but even if he had been rested, five high-level enemies at once would be—his eyes narrowed. He glanced towards the Goblin Lord, but the Goblin was trying to hold his guts in. Good. Even a healing potion wouldn’t heal that quickly. He had been shocked to see the bone walls go up. So he hadn’t planned this.

“So you’ve sent your minions to do what you’re too afraid to do in person, Az’kerash?”

The undead shifted when Zel spoke their master’s name. As if they were surprised. But who else could it be? Zel looked from face to face. Yes, who else?

“It seems you’ve planned this well. Did you plan on stabbing me in the back or were you always hoping that I might walk into a trap like this? Come out and face me yourself, coward. I know you’re watching.”

His words made the fires in the eyes of the undead glow brighter. Zel watched the bone woman—Venitra’s—eyes blaze bright green. So they could feel emotion. That was important to know.

A cold, precise voice filled the air in the dome, echoing. Zel had only heard Az’kerash speak a few times, but he could never forget that voice.

“I had intended to slay you at Liscor, but circumstances forced me to abandon that plan. Nevertheless, a strategy may be utilized again. My apprentice was the crux of this trap, though he did not know it. I am afraid I have little time to risk myself in battle, General Shivertail. It is my children you fight today. And it is they who will claim your life.”

That voice. Zel snarled, twisting around. But the Necromancer wasn’t here. He was speaking through his minions.

“Too afraid I’ll kill you a second time?”

Again the undead servants rustled. Az’kerash had called them his children? What had he done in the years since the Second Antinium War?

“Hardly. My battle was never with one individual. I wage war with Drakes, with species as a whole. The living are my enemy, Shivertail. You do not merit my presence. My creations are enough for you. Each one is a masterpiece, unique among their kind. Look upon them and despair, for they are your betters.”

“So you say. But you sent five.”

Again, Zel studied the undead. They had names; they had some kind of personality—were they Revenants? Spirits bound to flesh? Yes, they had to be. But two of them bothered Zel. Ijvani—he could have sworn he’d seen that staff before. Zel’s eyes widened as he recognized it.


The flames in the skeleton’s eyes flashed at Zel’s voice, and Venitra shifted. The Necromancer’s voice was amused.

“Yes. You encountered Venitra and Ijvani before. A shame neither one managed to accomplish their tasks. Tell me, how did you realize I was still alive? It seems you were…informed of my survival before now.”

His voice was…probing. Zel lied as he tried to think. The bone walls were meant to hold him. Cutting his way out while the undead attack from behind was suicide.

“It wasn’t hard to figure out. Your illusion spells aren’t as potent as you thought. And you have enemies.”

“Only naturally. But was it Magnolia Reinhart who told you I was alive, or someone else? I had suspected she was aware of my deception. Did she warn you about me, or had you known before that?”

There was a pressure in the air that made Zel want to talk about Ryoka. Truth spells. He bit his tongue and focused on the other undead. Ijvani was one thing. But Kerash? The undead Gnoll was clearly the leader, but there was something else about him.

Draugr weren’t too dangerous to Zel. They were strong, but there was a limit to their strength. They couldn’t exceed the capability of their bodies in life. So unless this Gnoll had been particularly powerful, he wasn’t as dangerous as, say, Venitra. But that name—

“Are you really Kerash, the Gnoll Warrior-Chieftain who died over a hundred years ago?”

Zel addressed Kerash. The Gnoll shifted his grip on his sword, his eyes never leaving Zel’s face.

“I am my master’s loyal servant. That is all you need to know before you die, Drake.”

“Well spoken, first of my Chosen.”

Az’kerash’s voice was approving. Zel’s eyes narrowed. So. Kerash. That might be…his eyes flicked again to the five undead. What were they? Assassins? Vanguards? But why have them at all?

“Children, you said? You created these horrors, Necromancer? That’s strangely sentimental for someone who uses the undead as disposable tools.”

“Hardly. These are my champions, my chosen few. They are created to be superior to all other undead, to lead and instill despair among my foes. You gave me the idea for them, in fact. After my defeat and ‘death’ in the last war I reflected on my weaknesses. These five, my Chosen, are my answer to that flaw.”

An answer to a flaw? But the Necromancer’s greatest weakness was—Zel’s eyes widened. He murmured out loud as the pieces fell into place.

“So that’s why you made them. I see. They truly are your masterpieces. Your…hope. And if I crush them, your plans are set back, aren’t they?”

There was a pause. Az’kerash’s voice did not reply. Zel smiled as the undead shifted. When the Necromancer did speak, there was a twinge, the slightest sense of uncertainty in his voice.

“Enough of this! Kerash, finish Zel Shivertail off.”

“Yes, master. Everyone, on my mark. Attack as one.”

Kerash’s voice rumbled as he gripped his sword with both hands. Venitra raised her shield and both Oom and Bea took a step forwards. Oom’s hands were in the pockets of his coat; Bea’s rotting palms were turned towards Zel. Ijvani raised her staff.

Silence. The five undead and one Drake waited. For one eternal, immortal moment, there was nothing but the pumping of Zel’s heart, the burning eyes of the undead. Then he saw Kerash’s mouth open. Zel moved before the undead could speak. He sprinted right, into Venitra and Ijvani and slashed.

“[Lightning Slash]!”

Ijvani cried out as Zel raked a claw across her arms and ribs, slicing across her black bones. Zel grunted as he hit her bones—they were metal, or coated with it! He recalled the same sensation as when he’d fought her the first time. But his slash had cut deep across her ribs and sent her stumbling back. Zel turned and saw Venitra rushing at him, ready to stab.

“[Bonebreaker Headbutt]!”

Another Skill. Zel stepped forwards and smashed his head into Venitra’s. He heard a crack, and saw her stumble back. Zel whirled, and sidestepped as Kerash charged him with his sword. Zel kicked and the Gnoll stumbled. He would have leapt on Kerash and torn the sword from his hands, but Oom and Bea were on his left, and Zel moved away rather than let either get close to him. They were just approaching. Were their attacks touch-based?

He turned, looking for Venitra, and saw a black, skeletal hand. Ijvani pointed with her staff and uttered a spell.

“[Blackfire Fireball].”

And then there was flame. Zel roared as the flames engulfed his body, burning every exposed part of him not covered by armor. He struck at Ijvani but she was already fleeing. And then Venitra crashed into his left, stabbing. Zel stumbled, regained his footing and pushed back as she tried to bowl him over.

The two titans struggled as Oom and Bea circled. And then Kerash was closing in with his sword. He stabbed Zel in the arm as the Drake fought. The [General] turned and roared again. But he was alone. And outnumbered.




Bring down that dome!

Sacra screamed the order and over a hundred [Mages] blasted the dome with spells from afar. Humans, a few half-Elves, and Goblins. Both armies were trying to crack the shields of bone, although the Goblins had switched to a defensive strategy to keep the Humans from nearing their Lord’s last line of defense.

Or so they assumed. Magnolia knew this had to be the work of the Necromancer. She stared as the rain of spells and enchanted arrows ceased.

“Nothing. Not a scratch.”

The bombardment hadn’t left a mark on the ivory surface, just cleaned it of the Goblin blood staining the outside.

“It’s impenetrable! Focus your attacks elsewhere! I want covering fire on our [Knights]! Take down that Crypt Lord!”

Sacra ordered the [Mages] to begin targeting Goblins. Magnolia knew it was the correct decision, but she would have rather kept trying to bring down the dome. Zel Shivertail could be in peril—

No, he was in peril! She knew it. Magnolia cursed, and saw a shape flick into the shadows behind her.

“Ressa, give me the weapon.”

Magnolia raised her hands and Ressa put the strange tube that her grandfather had given her into her hands without argument. The [Maid] stood behind Magnolia, her maid’s uniform covered in blood.

“Are you sure?”

“Zel Shivertail cannot be lost! Hold on, I’m aiming!”

Magnolia snapped as she raised the tube. She was no [Markswoman], but the dome was a big target and she felt like accuracy was not a requirement. She hesitated as she felt the magic contained in the artifact.

“How did grandfather Regis say to activate it? What was the command spell? Thaurmodesium?


“Yes, that! Thaurmodenasium! By my command, fire or—”

Magnolia felt the tube warm slightly, felt it kick in her hands, and heard nothing.

Precisely nothing. A cone of silence had burst from the tube. Magnolia felt it leave her hands and stepped back as the tube floated in place. It was a simple metal tube, inscribed with glowing runes on the inside and outside. Now these same runes glowed brighter and brighter, so brightly that they became a beacon.

Heads turned. Goblins and Humans alike stared as the tube glowed, and then emitted a series of—sparks. A few paltry sparks jettisoned out of the front of the tube. Magnolia stared as they flickered forwards and turned to Ressa.

“Is that it? Because if it is, I’m going to the family estate and burning it down—”

Ressa gripped Magnolia’s arm and pointed. Magnolia turned her head back just in time to see the sparks of lightning continue forwards. They were just flickering bits of energy, but for some reason, they neither earthed themselves nor dissipated. Instead, they hung in the air, and changed.

They became…diverse. Or perhaps they created more copies of themselves, because the air was suddenly dancing with bolts of lightning. They played over the Goblins and Humans in front of the tube, making the soldiers yelp and drop their metallic weapons. And then, from the tube, there came more lightning.

It was like lightning had come to life. Magnolia stared as a dragon made out of lightning took wing, emerging from the tube and flying forwards. She saw ships made of lightning, proud warriors and [Knights]—it was a light show! The lightning danced over the heads of both the Human and Goblin armies, making soldiers look up in awe. And as the Dragon soared overhead, doing absolutely no damage to the Goblin army, it left a trail of words in the sky.

The script was elegant, cursive, and hard to read. It was a different writing script than Magnolia had ever seen, but ancient as it was, it was still perfectly legible.


From the armories of the Emperor of Storms: a gift. To his enemies, see light and sound, ever fleeting, the wrath of the skies. Behold the advent of lightning.


And then there was light from the front of the tube. Magnolia blinked at it. The opening of the tube glowed and that was the last thing she saw for a while. She felt the impact as the air shattered, though. It threw her backwards and only Ressa catching her saved Magnolia from breaking her neck.

A bolt, a beam, a cascade of lightning burst forth from the mouth of the tube, cutting through the bemused ranks of Goblin soldiers and some of the Humans too close to the radius of the blast. The lightning did not fry those it touched—rather, it vaporized them. It left a trail of melted ground and smoke around fifteen feet wide as it shot across the battlefield. It hit the bone of dome—

And cracked it open. The bone splintered, the Necromancer’s magic broke. For a second, Ressa could see six shapes struggling in the darkness—then the magic of the lightning flashed around the opening. It obscured the rest, as the tube earthed its charge on the dome of bone.

It had been broken open, but as the shock of the spell reverberated across the battlefield she could see the walls of bone shudder and begin closing. The spell was reassembling itself.

“No! Get in there! War Golems, go to General Shivertail’s aide!

Magnolia struggled to get up. She thrust away Ressa’s hands and stumbled upright. Her ears were bleeding, her vision still blinded. Still she pointed. And the War Golems, cutting through the Goblins, turned.

They charged, shrieking, racing across the ground. Goblins raced to stop them, screaming. The first War Golem blasted them with a beam of fire. The second blasted the rest with lightning, far less powerful than that of Magnolia’s artifact, but still strong enough to shock and kill.

Go, go!

Magnolia screamed the words, Ressa holding her back. Across the battlefield, the Goblins were screaming the opposite.




“Stop them!”

Snapjaw raced at the second Golem, seeing Goblins with chains and rope trying to slow it. But the massive beast was unstoppable. She grabbed a chain and felt herself being dragged along. Lightning blasted her, travelling down the chain. Snapjaw felt her body shaking, saw flashes—she hung on.

Goblins seized her from behind. Two more Hobs grabbed a chain. Snapjaw saw them jerk as they held on. One Hob spasmed—she could see him dying as he held the chain. His heart—hers was fluttering, stopping. Still, they dug their heels in the mug.


The Goblins had formed a chain twenty bodies deep on each rope, but the War Golem had only slowed. It was still moving forwards. Still moving—

A shape blocked its way. Eater of Spears roared as he charged into the War Golem. He swung a fist and the massive metal monster punched back. It’s dagger-fingers sank into the giant Hobgoblin’s stomach, tore. Eater of Spears roared in pain and Snapjaw tried to drag the War Golem back.

The rift in the walls of bone was closing! They just had to hold the Golem—hold it—

Snapjaw wasn’t sure when the next bolt of lightning stopped her heart. She saw everything flash—found herself lying on her back. She sat upright, saw the Golem pounding Eater of Spears down. Saw him hold on to its legs.

The first Golem was at the opening. It pushed inside as the bone began to flow around it. The second threw aside Eater of Spears and raced for the opening. It crashed into the gap, made it halfway inside—and lodged in place. The bone covered it, entrapping the struggling Golem. It fought, and then, slowly, began to die. The magical dome was crushing its insides, bending the enchanted metal of its body. The Golem stopped moving and Snapjaw saw the bright light in its mouth dim and go out.

It was dead. But one of the Golems had entered. Snapjaw hoped it would be enough. But she had no idea what was going on inside. She only knew her Goblin Lord was alive.

The rest was a mystery.




Zel Shivertail was alone. He had been alone before. But never like this.

The undead surrounded him. Venitra cut at his left—Kerash his right. Zel blocked with his arm and leg. Both blades bit into his flesh. He roared and slashed at Kerash—a wall of oozing gelatin blocked him.

“Eat him, Oom!”

Bea cried out, circling Zel, afraid to get cut by his claws. Oom extended his ‘arm’, letting Zel’s claws sink further into his body. The Drake roared as he felt his scales burning and yanked his arm out.

“My second eldest creation, Oom. He was made to destroy you, Shivertail.”

Az’kerash’s voice was calm as the undead continued their attack. Ijvani blasted Zel with a spray of something black that tried to obscure his vision—he blocked it with his hand, and kicked at Venitra as she charged. But the bone woman was so heavy—her body was solid bone and the momentum of her change carried her in to him. She knocked Zel over and he grunted as her sword stabbed towards his head.


He threw her off her with all the strength he could manage. A sword stabbed at his breastplate and failed to penetrate his armor. Kerash slashed at Zel’s head and again the Drake blocked with an arm as he rose. More blood—another cut—the blade was terribly, terribly cold, but Zel could handle the pain.

What was worse was Oom. The undead creature had tangled around his legs, engulfing them. Zel tried to break free, and failed. Ijvani scorched him with another fireball made of black flames.

“Slimes! It’s not undead, it’s a damned—”

Zel roared as Oom tried to engulf him. He swung a fist and part of Oom’s body sprayed outwards, but the rest kept sticking to his body. The Necromancer’s voice was amused.

“Indeed. An Acid Slime, given sentience and far more power of course. It is rare for such a creature to form naturally, but a simple matter for me. Oom is your natural enemy, Shivertail.”

The acid was burning Zel, and if Oom covered his mouth, he’d be in Zel’s insides, suffocating him. Zel heaved and part of Oom splattered across the bone walls.

“Not yet.”

He moved his feet, but they were still stuck. Now Venitra and Kerash were on either side. Venitra swung and this time her blade cut deep into Zel’s arm. He staggered and Kerash sliced into his leg. Both blades hit bone.

Falling. Zel felt it. He twisted, reaching for a potion at his belt, but Oom was pulling him down again, trying to hold his arms. He had to—Zel felt more fire burning him, opened his mouth and felt it scorching his body. And Bea was reaching for him with a rotted hand.

And then the wall exploded. Zel felt the impact, felt something lift his body, Oom, and all the undead and throw them into the far wall. He slid to the ground, stunned, and then got up.


There was daylight! Something had blown open the wall of the dome! Zel saw shocked Goblin faces turning towards him and heard the Necromancer’s voice.

“How—what artifact was—Kerash! Do not let Shivertail escape!

His voice was urgent. Kerash and Venitra threw themselves in the way of the gap. Zel charged and his fist collided with Venitra’s shield. For the first time in that battle, Zel ran up against something he couldn’t push back. Venitra struck at him with her sword and he dodged left. The gap was closing! Zel ran at Kerash, not caring if he took a blade to get out—

And then Oom abandoned his trench coat. He surged out of his clothing and into the gap, creating a wall out of his body. The slime formed a wall and the undead created a wall in front of him. Zel halted. He stared at the undead and thought for a second.

Then he backed up. Kerash stared and Venitra lifted her sword uncertainly. She took a step forwards, but too late. Zel had a potion at his belt and was downing it.

“Stop him!”

Ijvani tried to cast a spell, but Zel sidestepped the bolts of lightning. The undead wavered, but if they moved they would have to abandon the closing gap to the outside. Grimly, Zel downed two more potions, feeling his wounds close and his body surge with energy.

And the gap closed. He couldn’t escape. Oom and the four other undead flowed away from the gap as it narrowed. Then Kerash’s head turned.

“What is that sound? Oom?”

Zel heard a shriek. The slime turned—and was splattered as one of Magnolia’s two War Golems surged into the gap. It turned, its glowing mouth appraising, and immediately slashed at Kerash. The undead scattered.

The gap in the ivory walls closed. Zel saw another Golem racing at the opening, saw it get caught—he was already leaping at Ijvani.

“Golem, cover me!”

He roared at the War Golem as it slashed at Venitra and Kerash. The two warrior-undead scattered to either side, blocking the Golem’s sharp dagger-fingers and cutting at its legs. Both their blades cut into the Golem’s enchanted body more easily than Zel’s flesh.

Help me!

Ijvani screamed at the other undead as Zel savaged her with his claws. He was trying to destroy her head, but her bones were tough and she was blocking with her staff. He ripped one arm off and then felt a cold stickiness engulf his left arm. His scales began to burn at the same time.

“Oom! Hold him so I can touch him!”

Bea dashed forwards. Zel kicked at her and she stumbled back. She was least agile of the undead. But she managed to distract him long enough—Oom finally managed to engulf Zel’s torso.

“Finish him, Oom!”

Kerash roared as he cut at the Golem’s legs. The Golem was on its knees—it couldn’t handle the onslaught of both undead at once. Zel saw its mouth glowing red and shouted.

“Golem—fire on me!

The War Golem looked up. It focused on Zel and he saw a fiery inferno grow in its mouth. The fiery laser erupted from its mouth and blasted Zel and Oom as they stood locked in place.


Bea screamed. The undead woman lurched forwards. Too late. The slime screamed, a soundless wail as the fire blasted its body apart. Zel felt Oom’s body vaporize around him. He stumbled, felt his scales flaking off. But his hands were reaching. Where—

There. He found a core in the slime’s body. A mana stone, his heart. It was large, as large as Zel’s fist. Oom’s gelatinous body wriggled around it, burning Zel, trying to infiltrate his body, burn it. Zel gripped the stone tightly.

All four undead were staring at him. Bea raised one hand. Her eyes were wide. Why had Az’kerash made her so much like a normal Human woman? Her voice shook.


Zel’s grip tightened. Oom screamed as the mana stone broke. And then there was silence.

The slime dripped from Zel’s body as he stood. The Drake swung his arm and the acid that had been Oom’s body splattered across the ground. He tossed the shattered mana stone to the ground and looked around.

The War Golem collapsed as Kerash drove his enchanted blade into the back of it’s head. Venitra rose, her shield smoking after having blocked a second fiery beam. The four undead stared at Zel Shivertail.

He was burned. His arms screamed—he could feel his bones cracked in places, feel the acid eating at him. But still Zel stood. He looked around at them, the confident undead, now, suddenly aware of their mortality.

“That’s one. Who’s next?”


Az’kerash’s voice was a hiss. Kerash raised his sword as he and Venitra flanked Zel again.

“You will pay for that.”

Venitra’s voice was deep. Zel laughed at her.

“Venitra, don’t rush in!”

Kerash stopped Venitra before the bone woman could charge at him. The Gnoll pointed.

“Ijvani, lock down the Drake’s movements. Venitra, cover me.”

He advanced, sword at the ready. Zel gritted his teeth as Ijvani tossed a spell at him. It was some kind of ooze—like Oom it stuck to whatever it touched. He got some on his leg as he pivoted to dodge—Kerash slashed at Zel’s eyes and was blocked. Venitra charged with her shield and Zel scored her twice across the chest with his claws. He could cut her body! But the strikes weren’t deep and the impact jarred his hands. Zel snarled, raised his claws.


And Bea touched his body.

It was quick, just a touch on his arm. But the instant her pallid flesh made contact with his, Zel felt a hot flash run down his arm. And then—a terrible uneasiness.

He whirled, seeing Bea’s hand stretched towards him. The undead woman had lunged at him, ignoring the danger. Zel’s claw took off her arm as she tried to retreat. But the second touch felt just as bad as the first. And as Bea stepped back there was a sense of…satisfaction in her eyes.

“What was—that?”

Zel sensed the other undead moving back. He grabbed at his belt and shattered a potion bottle as he smashed it over his arm. The liquid splashed across the spots Bea had touched him at. But instead of healing the spots she’d touched, the burning sensation ran down Zel’s arm. And—pain.

“Excellent job, Bea.”

Az’kerash’s voice sounded satisfied again. Bea picked up her arm and retreated. The undead watched Zel as he clutched at his arm. His arm and his claws hurt. Whatever the burning was, it was spreading like wildfire. Why? Because of the touch?

No, because of the potion. Zel realized his mistake too late. Healing potions healed most things, but they weren’t cure-alls. They couldn’t regenerate lost limbs, and they could only heal what a normal person could be expected to get through. That was because they amplified a body’s healing process, made it faster. And while that worked on damaged flesh and bone, it didn’t work on—


Bea spoke the words mockingly. Zel coughed, and stared at the blood on his claws. His lungs burned as the magical disease coursed through his body. He looked around. The undead grinned at him. Four mocking eyes. Zel closed his and straightened.

Then he smiled. The undead hesitated. Zel opened his claws as he tossed his belt and the healing potions to the ground. He nodded to them, and clenched one fist.

“Well then. Let’s end this, shall we?”

He charged Venitra first, ignoring the blade she stabbed into his side. His claws were sharp. And there was nothing holding him back anymore.




The battle had been long. The battle had been short. To the Goblin Lord, it felt as though the battle between Zel Shivertail and the undead had gone on forever. He knew it couldn’t have been more than…no, how long had it been?

Five minutes? Ten minutes? Twenty minutes? Half an hour? It continued. Zel Shivertail whirled, striking left and right, refusing to let the undead regroup. They had burned him, cut him, smashed his bones, poisoned him, infected him—and yet he stood.

The Goblin Lord had seen it all. He had lain where Zel had fallen, clinging to life with his own magics as the undead and the Drake battled. Now, he desperately uncorked a healing potion, one of the ones Zel had dropped and poured it over his stomach.

His organs began to heal. The Goblin Lord pushed them into his stomach, trying not to scream as Zel cut at Venitra. The Drake [General] was gasping, his green scales mottled with the disease as it spread unnaturally fast. Part of his body was simply black with ash and soot—his scales were flaking off. Yet still he attacked. Venitra raised her shield as the claws slashed across them. Zel hit her with a punch that cracked her pristine face.

“You dare—”

She cried out in outrage as fracture lines ran from one cheek. Venitra swung her sword and Zel grabbed it.


He roared as he yanked the blade away. Venitra abandoned her shield and raised a massive fist. She swung and Zel punched. The Drake’s fist shattered her nose. His next blow cracked her bone chest plate.

The Drake lifted Venitra, her entire massive body and threw her at Bea, who’d been sneaking up on him from behind. The blow sent both female undead tumbling to the ground and Bea’s body broke as Venitra landed on her. Zel turned and Kerash’s sword lanced into his shoulder. Zel’s slash opened the Gnoll’s chest, exposing his ribs.

“[Blackfire Fireball]!”

Ijvani fired the same spell again, engulfing Zel in flames, giving Kerash a second to retreat. Zel turned, his body blazing, and kicked Ijvani. The skeleton broke into pieces and crashed to the ground. Venitra struggled to her feet and Az’kerash’ voice spoke in the silence as Zel paused a moment to gasp for air.


The Goblin Lord could hear Zel’s lungs wheezing for air. The Drake took a step towards Kerash and stumbled. The Gnoll backed up. His chest hung open, the dead flesh severed. Venitra raised her sword unsteadily.


The undead paused. Az’kerash’s voice was sharp as Zel coughed more blood up.

“[Flesh Regrowth]. [Mend Bones]. Venitra, support Kerash! Your role is to take his blows not charge in alone! Ijvani, advance! Use more powerful spells to decimate the area—the other three will survive your magic! Bea, attempt to find the Drake’s back!”

“He’s still standing, master! He shouldn’t be—he should be dead by now!”

Bea cried out as she circled Zel. The Drake turned to face her, his eyes burning. He was slowing though. The Goblin Lord could see it. And yet, it was Zel who made the first move. He slashed at Bea, cutting into her stomach as she leapt back. Again, the contact with her body made whatever infection that was coursing through Zel intensify, but he ignored the spreading stain on his claws. He stood and beckoned at the other undead as they circled him warily.

“Come on. Come on! I thought you were supposed to be monsters!”

His eyes blazed beneath the blood and burnt scales on his face. Again, the four hesitated. But they attacked as one, moving in perfect unison.

Venitra low, Kerash high. Bea from the left, Ijvani from the back. Zel cut Kerash and seized Venitra’s head. He twisted and the bones forming her neck began to crack.


Again Zel roared the word. Venitra managed to loosen his grip on her and stumbled back. The undead retreated as Zel swung at Ijvani, staring. Zel stumbled.

“You cannot win this battle, Shivertail. I am impressed you are still standing. But—”

“Four left.”

Zel regained his balance and grabbed Kerash’s blade as it swung at his head. His claws bled as the enchanted metal dug into his claws. He hit Kerash in the face, bashing the Gnoll’s face in. Kerash stumbled back. Bea leapt at Zel and he kicked her. The tip of his foot pierced her abdomen and he stomped her to the ground. She gasped.

“Your minions can’t kill me.”

Zel rasped as he ground Bea’s body underneath his foot. She was grabbing at his leg and he was ignoring it. Venitra and Kerash attacked with Ijvani, but Zel refused to budge.

“You think you understand strength! I am the shield of the Drakes! I am a [General]! And a general does not fall!

He bent and cut Bea in two. She gasped and stared at her lower half, separate from her torso. Zel turned.


He charged into Venitra, trading blows with the bone knight. It was she who fell back, cracked and broken. Zel ignored Kerash as the Gnoll cut at his back. And the Goblin Lord moved.

Slowly, ever so slowly he rose. His body was weak, and he had no more magic for a spell. But Venitra had dropped her sword as Zel continued his assault. The bone blade was heavy, but strong. The Goblin Lord grabbed it stealthily.


Kerash was dueling Zel as Venitra fell to one knee. He was falling back—Ijvani was cowering, her body nearly torn to bits. The Goblin Lord crept up on Zel from behind, sword raised. He aimed for Zel’s neck as the Drake beat Kerash down with blows that cracked the undead Gnoll’s shoulders and arms. Wait…Zel’s claws were on Kerash’s head. He began to twist—

Now. The Goblin Lord leapt forwards. Zel turned, fast as a snake. He kicked the Goblin Lord and the Goblin felt his ribs crumple from the blow. He fell, gasping, as Zel flung Kerash backwards.


He coughed more blood out as he kicked the Goblin Lord before he could go for the sword again. Kerash stumbled up—Zel’s fist cracked his skull.


The Drake [General] was slowing, but he still charged Venitra as she came at him. The two grappled, desperate, Venitra’s body breaking. The Goblin Lord tried to get up. He grabbed the sword and slashed at Zel’s legs. The Drake grunted as the blade pierced his thigh. He turned, grabbed the Goblin Lord and raised a claw as he shoved Venitra back. The undead woman stumbled, and the Goblin Lord looked into Zel’s eyes.


Someone moved behind the Goblin Lord. He saw Zel’s eyes widen, felt the Drake release him. Too slow.

“[Diamondshard Spray].”

A hand rose and pointed. The Goblin Lord felt something flash past his face—tear through one of his ears. Zel stumbled. Glittering shards of diamond shot through the air, some as long as daggers, tearing into his face, his body. The Drake turned towards Az’kerash as the Necromancer raised his hands. He moved.

“[Accelerate Spell]. [Stone Lance].”

Zel’s head twisted. The Goblin Lord saw a flash, felt the impact on the far wall as the lance of stone broke. And as Zel Shivertail turned his head back, the Goblin Lord saw part of his head was missing.


Again, the Necromancer pointed. This time the black magic that washed over Zel was a wave, far stronger than anything the Goblin Lord could create. It sapped the last of the Drake’s energy, rendered his body stiff. Az’kerash pointed, at the Drake’s chest and uttered the spell again.


The dark magic struck Zel. He stumbled, his leg moved—stopped. He stood in place, eyes vacant.


There was no light in his eyes. The Goblin Lord wanted to cry out. Treachery! He had attacked from behind! But that was how Goblins fought. And yet the Necromancer…Az’kerash’s black eyes were locked on Zel’s own. The Drake’s gaze was unmoving.


The fourth spell was the last. Zel didn’t move as the spell struck him. Az’kerash lowered his finger then, and looked around.

“Ah, my apprentice. Your timing was quite useful. For that distraction I thank you.”

The Goblin Lord stared up at his master, at Az’kerash. The Necromancer was here. Here. He must have used one of his Scrolls of Greater Teleport to come here. The Goblin Lord knew he had only eleven left. No—four now. He had spent those valuable artifacts for this.

For Zel Shivertail. The Necromancer turned his gaze back to the Drake. Zel Shivertail stood in place, part of his head simply…gone. He had dodged the worst of the Necromancer’s spells, but a shard of diamond had taken his left eye. And his body was burnt black in places, cut from a thousand blades, and discolored from where Bea’s plague touch had spread.

And still, he had fought through it all. And if the Necromancer had not come at the last—the Goblin Lord looked away.


A voice interrupted the silence. Bea crawled towards her creator, her body badly damaged. The Goblin Lord moved away from her as she dragged her torso towards Az’kerash. She was holding a broken stone in her hands.

“Ah, Bea.”

Az’kerash greeted her with obvious satisfaction in his voice. The undead woman did not share his joy. She held the pieces of Oom’s mana stone in trembling hands.

“Oom! He’s dead, master. Can you—is he—”


The Necromancer’s voice was cold and dispassionate. Bea stared up at him, her legs separated from her body, cradling what remained of Oom.

“But he fought! Master—”

“I warned him to safeguard his mana core at all costs. He was foolish, allowing that War Golem to damage him so. No, perhaps it was Shivertail I underestimated. Or was it the capabilities of my Chosen? Venitra, Kerash, rise. I am disappointed in you both. And perhaps you most of all, Ijvani, how is it you failed to damage Zel Shivertail in any meaningful way throughout the battle?”

The other undead, the Necromancer’s Chosen, began to rise, shamefaced. Venitra had to have Kerash’s help to stumble upright.

“Master. We are grateful.”

Kerash’s voice rasped. Az’kerash eyed him.

“You are badly damaged, Kerash. I must restructure your body when we return to the castle. All of you. Prepare yourselves for transit. I will destroy the enchantment protecting this place momentarily. Ijvani, you will make your way back with an invisibility spell; there are no more scrolls of teleportation.”

Yes, master.

The Goblin Lord stared at the black skeleton as she stumbled away from the others. Bea still pleaded with her master.

“Master, what if I took the fragments back? If I put it in Oom’s special place, maybe—”

“He is gone, Bea.”

Az’kerash’s eyes flashed with annoyance and the undead woman shrank back. He turned, his face displeased, and then relented as he looked towards Zel again.

“Ah, General Shivertail. What a formidable opponent you were. Perhaps if you had been a touch faster in battle, or escaped Bea’s touch a moment sooner, I might have reconsidered arriving myself. But for all your strength in life, you will be the finest of my servants in death. For that I thank you.”

He walked over to Zel, his hands reaching out to touch the Drake’s chest. The Goblin Lord saw Zel’s eyes flicker, saw the Drake’s claws move.

[Antimagic Slash]!”

The cut was fast. It scythed through the almost-invisible aura of protection around the Necromancer’s body, cut into his neck—but only just. Zel was too far away. His claws only opened the Necromancer’s throat. And as the Necromancer staggered back, his black eyes wide with shock, Zel collapsed.


The Necromancer’s throat did not bleed. He covered his pale flesh and stared at Zel. The Drake looked up at him, fallen, unable to move. Just looked.

“Return! Apprentice, finish the Drake! Secure his corpse!”

Az’kerash’s voice snapped. He grabbed for a scroll at his side and vanished. The undead around him stared at their master—Ijvani disappeared in a pop as she cast [Lesser Teleport] and the others fled, pulling out scrolls of their own. The Goblin Lord looked around, stunned by the sudden absence of the other undead.

“Hah. Hahaha. Coward.”

Zel Shivertail lay on the ground, laughing. He was still alive. Somehow. The Goblin Lord could see into his head, but the Drake still clung to life. His eyes turned to the Goblin Lord.

“I’m sorry.”

The Goblin Lord said it as he knelt by Zel’s side. He stared down at the Drake, seeing how the enchanted armor had failed in places. The magical metal had been melted in one place, pierced in two. Zel Shivertail stared up at the ivory ceiling overhead. The enchantment was breaking up—the dome was collapsing in places, letting sunlight in.

The Goblin Lord could hear Humans and Goblins shouting outside the dome in confusion. There was still a battle going on. But in this moment he only had eyes for Zel. He felt he should say something.

“I’m sorry. It was not a worthy death. Cowardly. It was—”

He got no further. A hand shot out and grabbed him by the throat. The Goblin Lord choked, tried to move back. He couldn’t. Zel Shivertail sat up, his grip crushing the Goblin Lord’s throat.

“I’m not dead yet.”

He stared at the Goblin Lord with his one good eye. It blazed with a strange light. How could he still move? How could he—the Goblin Lord was choking.

“I could kill you. It would be so easy.”

Zel Shivertail said the words casually. He stared at the Goblin Lord, and then, suddenly, released him. The Goblin Lord stumbled backwards, gasping for air.

“I don’t feel like it. Not anymore.”

Zel stared ahead. His head was—blood dripped from the missing part of his head. His voice was distant.

“I feel so tired. So this is how it ends? Funny, I always thought it would be—quicker.”

He turned his head. The Goblin Lord stared at him. But Zel was no longer looking at him. The Drake [General] looked ahead, and his voice was very distant.

“Sserys, old friend. I couldn’t lead them. I couldn’t inspire them like you did. But I tried. I wonder, would you say this was a job well done? I couldn’t kill the Necromancer, in the end. I only got one of his minions. And…”

His voice trailed off. Zel’s head drooped. His voice was lower. The Goblin Lord moved forwards to hear. Zel’s voice was a whisper as he looked ahead, looked at the past.

“My mentor, my friend, wings of my heart, did I do a good job? Defending our people? It was so very difficult without you. Will I see you, I wonder? Will you say I did a good job or a bad one when we meet?”

“You did.”

The Goblin Lord spoke, his voice trembling. He reached out, hesitated. He spoke, as gently as he could.

“You did. You protected them. Your people. You did it. It was a good job.”

Zel stirred. His eyes focused on the Goblin Lord’s face and he frowned.

“I’ll let Sserys tell me in person, Goblin.”

He stared at the Goblin, and then smiled. It was such a strange thing that the Goblin Lord nearly smiled back. The Goblin brushed at his eyes and was surprised to find water on his claws. Zel looked at him.

“Do you have a name?”

“No. No name. Just Goblin Lord. Apprentice. Goblin.”

The Goblin Lord sat next to Zel as the dome broke. The Drake looked up at the sky. He sighed.

“How strange. Everyone should have a name. It doesn’t seem right. You—should have one.”

The Goblin Lord was silent. Zel stared up, blood dripped slowly from his wounds. And then stopped.

“How about Reiss? It’s a proper Drake name. If I had a son—Sserys always talked about wanting to raise a boy and name him that.”

Reiss. The Goblin Lord stared at Zel for a second. The Drake laughed.

“Take it if you want it. I don’t think Sserys will mind. And—no, never mind.”

“I will. And I will avenge. Avenge you and my people. I swear it. The Necromancer will die by my hand.”

The Goblin Lord looked at Zel. The Drake eyed him, and then shrugged.

“Good. I hope you do it. But I won’t be around to see it. And truthfully…I would have liked to…”

His voice trailed off. Reiss looked into Zel’s eyes and saw the Drake’s vision had gone distant again. Zel whispered as the Goblin Lord wiped at his eyes again.

“A good job. Did I do it?”

He laughed once.

“I suppose I’ll never know. But I did try. I did—”

Reiss waited a long time, but Zel never finished his sentence. He sat there, the last traces of laughter still on his face. The Tidebreaker stared up at the sky as the walls of ivory finally broke and both armies could see into the dome at last.

There was just silence at first. Reiss sat with Zel, head bowed, until he realized that it looked like both he and Zel were dead. He stood slowly, and heard the Goblins roaring. But from the Human side there was no noise.

There was only silence. Then the Goblin Lord heard a groan from the Humans. It sounded like something living had been torn from them. He saw the armored ranks of men and woman falter, saw some fall to their knees and others begin to weep. The news dawned on the army slowly as they saw the Goblin Lord standing over the distant form of their [General].

Zel Shivertail was dead. The Tidebreaker had fallen.

And the Goblin Lord had slain him.

It was not the truth. Reiss wanted to scream it out loud. But he couldn’t. And the Goblins roared as they saw the fallen Drake and their victorious leader. They streamed towards him, screaming, staring in awe at the fallen Zel Shivertail.

“Dead! Dead, dead, dead!

Snapjaw shouted the words in triumph. She and the other Goblins were fighting to get to the Goblin Lord, offering potions. One Goblin reached to push Zel Shivertail aside. Reiss whirled and shouted.


The Goblins froze. The Goblin Lord looked around and pointed to Zel Shivertail’s body.

“Leave body. Anyone who touches, dies.”

They stared at him, and then at the fallen Drake. Reiss wiped at his eyes. He said one word.


He turned and walked away. Uncomprehending, the Goblins stared at him and then followed. Reiss the Goblin Lord led his army away as the Humans stared at the slumped figure in shining armor. They wept, and the cry went up. It echoed across the battlefield, across the city of Invrisil, and out onto the rest of the continent. The words shook the world.




Magnolia Reinhart wept as she retreated from the battlefield. Ressa, beside her, was dry-eyed, but her hands were tight on her mistress’ arm as she guided Magnolia away. The Lady Reinhart spoke only once as they retreated behind the procession bearing the Tidebreaker’s body away from the battle.

“I am offering a hundred thousand gold coins. No, I will offer a million gold coins or whatever artifacts I own. Spread the word among the Assassin’s Guilds, in every part of the world. I will have the Necromancer dead, Ressa.”

“Yes, milady.”




A’kerash strode through his castle, his damaged servants, his Chosen trailing after him. They were four now, and they dared not speak to him. The Necromancer had triumphed today, but that victory was hollow as well.

“Oom’s death was unfortunate.”

That was all Az’kerash said as he halted in front of his rooms. The four undead looked at him. Bea’s face was a mask of grief. The Necromancer looked at each of them and then away.

“I see I have overestimated your capabilities. Or perhaps underestimated that of my foes. The next generation of your brothers and sisters will lack your weaknesses.”

They bowed their heads. Az’kerash turned.

“I will repair you all shortly. Rest, and regain your strength. I have need of you yet. I have eliminated one of my greatest foes today.”

He turned and smiled bitterly. And from his castle, the same words were repeated. They broke upon the Walled Cities, and shattered the hearts of the Drakes. The end of a legend. The death of an era.

Fear for the future.




The news struck Liscor like a wave. Grief-stricken Drakes stood in the streets, weeping, and the Gnolls were little better. Zel Shivertail was dead. The hero of the Second Antinium Wars, the shield that had protected Izril for so long, had fallen.

In The Wandering Inn, Klbkch saw Erin weeping at the counter and Lyonette slumped at a table. Mrsha was howling from the top of the inn. He turned, and left the building.

Klbkch did not weep. The Antinium did not cry. He slowly walked through the streets of Liscor, hearing the horns blowing, seeing grief in every corner. He walked into the Antinium Hive and heard a hush. The Workers and Soldiers did not understand the grief and fear, yes, fear that gripped the hearts of those above.

Well, that was their nature. Klbkch descended through the tunnels, walking by memory, and came to a large room. The Queen of the Free Antinium looked down at him.


“My Queen. Has the artifact been installed to your satisfaction?”

“So it seems. The Courier delivered it to the door of the Hive this morning. I have placed it here.”

The Queen indicated a mirror made out of black glass, a tall frame that was far too small to reflect her entire body. Klbkch stared at it. It did not fit in this room, but it was a powerful artifact and there were few good alternatives.

“Have you activated it yet?”


The Queen of the Free Antinium stared at Klbkch as he slowly walked over to the mirror. He placed a hand on it and the surface rippled. It changed. Instead of reflecting the Queen and Klbkch, the surface swam until it was reflecting another room.

It was quite similar to the one Klbkch stood in. The only difference was that this room was carved of stone, and there were quite a number of tunnels leading to and from this cavernous room. And the Queen in the center was far, larger than the Queen of the Free Antinium. She was massive, bloated, and rested on a huge dais in the center of the room. She stared towards the mirror.

“Klbkchhezeim? The connection is strong it seems. How fares the Free Antinium?”

“Zel Shivertail is dead.”

Klbkch’s voice was flat. The Grand Queen of the Antinium went still. In the frame, Klbkch saw one of the Antinium gathered around her turn. Xrn stared at him. The Grand Queen was silent as she stared at Klbkch. Then her mandibles parted and rose.

“Good. We have much to do, Klbkchhezeim, my Queen of the Free Antinium.”

She waved a languid feeler. The Antinium turned to face Klbkch, and the Grand Queen spoke.

“The Goblins are moving once more. The Humans stir for war. The Drakes have lost their shield. And the Antinium will rise.”

Klbkch nodded. He stared at the Grand Queen of the Antinium, and his hands tightened on the hilts of his sword. He said only one word.



End of Volume 4.




Author’s Note:


So, we come to this at last. At last, the volume ends. And I had planned to write this last chapter directly before the break. Perhaps it’s better that I didn’t. Perhaps it would have been better had I not had the break.

We’ll never know. But it is done, and the world is changed now. Zel Shivertail is dead. And what follows will be…different.

This is the darkest end to a volume, and speaks of what is to come. And yet, and yet, our story is about Erin, about hope, and about more than just war. But it does feel like war and conflict threaten us despite our best hopes. As in this world, so in ours.

Thank you for reading. I had a good break, and I think it was appropriate—I hope to take a week long break after every end of volume, if only to recharge a bit. I have a lot of ideas for the next volume and a lot of story yet to come. Some of it will be tragic, some horrific (hopefully not due to bad writing), other parts hopeful, or sad or silly or…

Thank you all for supporting the story, whether it be from pledging or talking about it, or simply reading. I have a lot I want to do, from releasing the e-book to fixing typos and plot points and adding a glossary. I have a lot to do, but what I start and end with is this: writing. I hope you enjoy the story and if you do, I have a lot more to tell.

See you soon. I’m back to writing and Volume 5 begins in two days. I’ll put the monthly side stories poll up soon too, and maybe another short (non-canonical) piece side story I wrote during my vacation. Thanks for reading as always,



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    • I just remembered that the people referred to the Antinium also as “Black Tide”, making the name of one of Reiss’ lieutenants, “Blacktide”, a bit repetitive.

    • The hero of the Second Antinium Wars,

      Shouldn’t it be: of the Second Antinium War(singular) or
      of the two/ of both Antinium Wars ?

    • “Many had open-mouths.”
      Unnecessary hyphen since it’s a regular adjective and noun, not combined to make an adjective (i.e. open-mouthed).

      “There {was} only a hundred feet separating the two as Zel Shivertail and the Goblin Lord locked eyes.”
      {was} -> {were}?

      “Zel saw a bone-white woman, {no} a woman made of bone, a giant wearing bone armor and holding a sword and shield step out.”
      Would flow better with a comma.

      “features concealed by a hat. The rotting undead spoke for both of them.”
      Extra space between sentences.

      “{It’s} dagger-fingers sank into the giant Hobgoblin’s stomach, tore.”
      {It’s} -> {Its}

      “But the bone woman was so heavy—her body was solid bone and the momentum of her change carried her {in to} him.”
      {in to} -> {into} I don’t know how to explain it but “in to” isn’t correct here.

      “The War Golem collapsed as Kerash drove his enchanted blade into the back of {it’s} head.”
      {it’s} -> {its}

      “The undead grinned at him. {Four} mocking eyes.”
      There are still four undead, so maybe this was meant to be {Four sets} of eyes?

      “Venitra struggled to her feet and {Az’kerash’} voice spoke in the silence as Zel paused a moment to gasp for air.”
      {Az’kerash’} -> {Az’kerash’s}

      “Az’kerash pointed, at the Drake’s chest and uttered the spell again.”
      Stray comma.

      • No, it’s correct as it is.
        You could say
        “I’m going to *go to* the family estate and burn it down”
        Go there and do something
        Going there and doing something

    • “Klbkch nodded. He stared at the Grand Queen of the Antinium, and his hands tightened on the hilts of his sword.”
      Should be “swords”.

    • Author I know you were unwilling to kill Zel off. His monologue was lengthy. I’m angry but understanding of your decision. Great chapter.

    • ———
      A spire of bone shot out of the ground, *implaling a Hob and two smaller Goblins.
      *A’kerash strode through his castle, his damaged servants, his Chosen trailing after him.

  1. Wow. That was insane. My hear weeps for Zel. Maybe the Goblin Lord will have his redemption. The Necromancer remains a mystery though. I wonder what drives him…

  2. This chapter went exactly as i had anticipated it to, it’s how it had to go. and now we see the weight of fate changing. my next prediction is of what becomes of Magolia next, and I dread seeing the drakes use zel as a martyr for their war on humans. this battle gave them all the reason they needed to fracture radically.

  3. Chapters like this always makes me wonder what i want out of a story.
    I came for Erin and her struggle in a new world. This world expanded from a small Inn to the strong and mighty. And the events steer us from a small clash of armies right into the third antinium war. So many People to keep track of so many stories to tell. I wonder where the future focus will go and if this story will continue to be about Erin und our special Charakters or the focus will change to the whole of Isril and the Powers that change its fate

    • Don’t forget we don’t know Piesces’ statut regarding Az, after all he didn’t tell anyone yet did he (that we know of)…

      For all we know he’s already getting the knowledge he wants from Az…

      Although, from what we know of Piesces, I don’t think he would want to get his friends killed… but he is kind of reckless.

  4. I can certainly say that few books (I think I could count in one hand) have made me feel this much despair. I am totally crushed right now.

    And this is great, it speaks volumes about your writing skills.

    Just… damn.

  5. Magnificent. Simply magnificent. Your writing is divine. I’ve read many books, especially published ones, but I must say that this one beats them all. Thank you.

    PS: Rip Zel Shivertail, your death marks the fall of the drakes.

  6. “Let me tell what I wish I’d known, when I was young and dreamed of glory- you have no control; who lives, who dies, who tells your story…”

    Rest in peace Zel Shivertail, [Shield of the Dragonlands].

  7. >”side story I wrote during my vacation”

    because of course you wrote during your vacation, lol

    love your stuff. <3

  8. Excellent chapter, just excellent. Maybe it’s silly, but for me one of the marks of a good story and good writing is the ability to making me cry. This chapter certainly did that.

    That final line has me thinking: “Perhaps.”

    That strikes me as something one should NOT say to the Grand Queen of the Antinium. When your boss tells you to do something you don’t say “perhaps” that applies even if your boss is some incompetent middle manager, much less the undisputed ruler of your species. Does this herald an Antinium Civil War? I don’t see Klbkch, Pawn, or the Painted Soldiers wanting to wage war on the other species anymore when they know co-existence is possible. Beneficial to the Antium, even.

    • It heralds the Third Antinium War. Its just that this one has even more sides than the last one.

      I’m counting:

      Three Goblin factions (Rags’, Tremborag’s, and Reiss’s)

      Two Antinium (the cooperative/friendly ones, and the opportunistic backstabbers)


      The Drakes (potentially split themselves depending on whether the nobles respond to Zel’s death with more pointless politicking or by finally getting their act together)

      The Gnoll tribes (will almost certainly continue to side with the Drakes unless the Lords of the Wall fuck up big time, so probably not worth considering separately)

      The Humans (Magnolia’s faction is effectively broken as a military force, so that leaves them with only a single meaningful side as far as the war is concerned. This could easily change if Magnolia manages to bring the Titan over to her side though)

      And, lest we forget, the King of Destruction. Given what happened last time, I kinda doubt he’s eager to split up what remains of his Seven, so he probably play any meaningful role until he’s finished subduing Chandrar and can fully focus on expanding to other continents again. Still, if the war goes on for long enough he could sweep in and form a dangerous faction of his own.

      So, yeah. That’s anywhere from nine to twelve different sides this time. The Antinium don’t even have the distinction of having the most, that dubious honor goes to the goblins.

      • You forgot the [Emperor] amongst the human factions (and I do agree that I wouldn’t count magnolia out, she did protect her power base in the city of adventurers).

        Plus, there is sure to be quite a few other factions coming to help or “help” with their own agendas : Rheim, the Belaros mercenary companies (including the UN), Wistram, the Terrandrian kingdoms, the dungeon awakening under Liscor…

        And I’m sure we’re still missing some…

  9. Damn.. I’m sad. But it was great seeing Zel take offense to people saying he was dying or should’ve been dead, looks like it thoroughly pissed him off the way he grabbed the G-lords neck, which was funny I thought. Glad he gave me a quick laugh before exiting stage right, so thanks for the trip of a chapter, I really thought he was gonna pull it off for a second there, it was looking bleak but damnit he was the Tidebreaker right then and there, odds be damned, he was gonna do it, everybody felt it, G-lord and me both. For me one of the best things about reading is feeling the emotion of the moment and the characters, and really immersing yourself in it, and you made an amazing moment there with a special character there, tears were shed. Thanks again for the consistent quality, its something I personally appreciate. Its something else to be able to write as much as you do with such quality, its baffling really

  10. bring the tidebreaker back from the dead… let the dragon go back in time or something like that ;(

    but i know that wont happen knowing the way you write your story… they never come back…………..

    rip zel shivertail aka the tidebreaker, we will remember you

    • Talking about Terriarch, that’s another character that is in great danger narratively speaking.

      Just like Zel had to die because he was too mentorly and strong, so much that he needed to go to make way for our heroes, the same can be said of the friendly dragon…

  11. I feel kinda guilty for asking in this chapter specifically, but what benefits do people get for leveling up? I know that’s bound to be a spoiler to a point, but I just want to know if there are any non-Skill benefits to leveling up at all. Like is Zel’s incredible toughness due in part due to high level, or is it purely the result of multiple defensive skills working in concert?

    • Lesser strength is a always on thing for instance and people are know to get multiple skills for level ups sometimes

      • Ja, but they’re also known to get nothing on some level ups. That implies that levels have to do something besides give you skills, otherwise you’d actually be worse off after some level ups because you’d have increased difficulty gaining levels with nothing to show for it.

        • Well, that’s a good question. It could be there are some hidden attributes, but there could be an easier explanation.
          We speculate with a certain degree of certainty that there’s some entity that manages the level system. Well, if this entity is reasonable, it is only natural to order things so that the system is easy to understand. With these ‘hollow levels’ you fill the gaps so that you can tell how much good is someone at their class just knowing their level. You know that a level 60 [cook] is a lot better at cooking than a level 30 [swordsman] at swinging his sword. Also, this system evidentiates the fact that skills at decimal levels are better. It is also nice because it lets you speculate that there is a level cap at 100.

    • The mechanics and benefits of leveling up (Skill-based or not) are pretty vague, but there are a few things that have been pretty heavily implied or outright stated:

      Higher levels allow for stronger Skills. (This is the one that’s definitely canon.) So a [General] of Zel’s level might have some very powerful personal defensive skills.

      As for benefits that have a less certain canon status: It has seemed to me that the higher your level is in a class, the more your personality (and perhaps ability) matches that class. So Erin becomes a more welcoming hostess as she levels, with a better sense of what her guests want and like. And Laken gets urges to create an empire, to dominate and conquer and expand, and becomes more willing to order people around.

      Also, I suspect that the strength of Skills- even ones that were gained at lower levels- increases as a person levels. So Magnolia’s [Deft Hand] can be used to deflect a storm of arrows when it was originally meant for a small nudge in a ballroom, and Erin’s [Inn’s Aura] has gone from pressing people down to making her look terrifying.

    • I think higher levels increase the skills and ability related to it, such as a swordsman getting better with the sword. I think this is one of the reason stuff like martial arts isn’t really a thing in this world. Or maybe I was misunderstanding that part.
      Leveling up probably also mean a tiny increase in ‘stats’, such as body strength/durability for warriors and potentially, maybe, more mana for mages. Otherwise I can’t explain the exponential superiority of higher leveled combatants. Just Skills and skill wouldn’t cut it.
      Alternatively, in a scene from Ryokas PoV there was a mention that her body had somehow gotten stronger in this world even without levels. I am guessing that this is a kind of passive mana augmentation, since the old smoker said that people could use mana potions to augment their bodies if they first got acclimated to it. This system would also explain why the Goblin King was so strong, since he commands the mana of countless Goblins. Maybe people with higher levels have a better augmentation based on just ambient mana? But that doesn’t really make sense as a sole explanation, more as something in addition to small stat growth per level.

      Just a lot of speculation on my part though.

      • So if mages get higher mana when they level up, what about MAGICAL Innkeepers? Their inn gets more mana to power more artifacts and familiars?

    • I hate to be all condescending and stuff but don’t you guys play RPGs ? Of course everyone gets stronger with higher levels irregardless of skills. In a d+d like game system the skills are the icing on the cake on top of increased hit points, ‘mana’, saving throws and so on. I don’t see innworld being any different in that way.

      • How dare you? How DARE you impugn my roleplaying credentials!?

        I’ll have you know, you absolute cad, that I cut my teeth upon the very first edition of Dungeons and Dragons. I rolled straight d20s for my stats and I kept that three in Constitution goddammit! I died three times in the first three sessions and I liked it!

        Retract your statements good sir, or face me on the field of honor.

        Sincerely, Sir Soren Knight

      • Seriously though, the benefits of leveling are usually more explicit, ie stat increases and such, in most litrpgs.

        The Wandering Inn is still better than all of those, but it did throw me off.

    • In an early torren chapter, as he levels up he realizes he getting stronger and smarter regardless of the skills he has. He’s a unique case, but his main class was skeleton knight and warrior (I think) before that. So its probably safe to assume its part of the levelling up system.

    • Take a look at the first chapters of the Clown/Tom, it is said that his group tested if they got stronger because of the difference in level.

      And the test was positive, btw.

  12. Some things I wonder about in the upcoming volume:
    – Will Liscor’s citizens demand the heads of the hobs staying in Erin’s inn as they grieve for Tidebreaker?
    – How does this affect Lord T’s plans (the one opposing Magnolia) if the goblins just up and leave? Magnolia has lost troops, but if the goblins do decide to attack Invrisil (they were ordered there because of the Necromancer.) Can he still gain the political power he wants if there are no goblins to fight?
    – Where are the goblins leaving to?
    – How will Illvriss respond and will he meet Tidebreaker in the dreamtime like he does Periss?
    – How will the Necromancer respond to Reiss’s rebellion when he doesn’t get the Tidebreaker’s corpse?

  13. Welcome back,. Honestly that was hardly even a break, and you wrote during it (surprising very few I expect)! However the payoff was as expected, that was a marvelous edge of the seat update. And yes I cried too. I loved the bit with Zel and reiss (good name) bonding at the end, though the rational part of me thinks it needs a better line to establish the transition from the goblin Lord doing all he can to kill Zel to being offended by the extent of the horrors that his master azkerash uses to bring him down.
    Emotionally it feels right, but logically there should be some expression of why . Perhaps it is nothing more than the goblin knowing that the necromancer is his true ultimate enemy, so when Zel is forced to switch from killing goblins to fighting the necromancer directly the goblin Lord has to emotionally take his side regardless..
    Luckily we already know that azkerash isn’t ommnicient so reiss should be able to get away with not claiming Zel’s body.

    • Az’kerash can see everything that the goblin lord does. That’s how he knew when to trap Zel. In one of the chapters with Osthia, we’re told that the goblin lord doesn’t actually like his master. Correct me if I’m wrong, but I think he’s serving Az’kerash because his life would be forfeit otherwise.

  14. Zel went out doing what he did best, challenging the odds and gifting his enemies with names. Of course Reiss needs to keep that to himself for now.

    I think Illvris will be inspired to become the new Tidebreaker.

  15. It seems the motif/theme of this chapter is ‘People rebelling against the authorities they are subject to.’

    Yellow-Splatters versus Pawn and the Hive

    Garen against Tremboag

    Lyonette against Erin

    Mrsha against Erin, Lyonette

    Zel versus the Drake Nobility

    Ivolethe versus the Faerie King

    Goblin Lord versus the Necromancer

    And last but not least.

    Klbkch and the Free Antinium Hive versus the Grand Antinium Queen

  16. The onion slicing ninjas are at again.

    The Tidebreaker is the Innverse’s White beard equivalent in One Piece.

    Lastly, the sad thing is, only the GL was the only witness of Zell’s final badassery.

  17. That was bloody brilliant, and a very fitting end to Zel, tanking everything the 5 had to offer, being hit with plague and still being able to crush them and only dropping when Az’Kerash shows up. It was a fitting end I think

  18. It’s time for some critique.

    I’m sorry but having the Goblin Lord start prattling on about honor and treachery after trying to shank Shivertail throughout the fight, not to mention the suicide bombers/necromancy/sniping, is hilariously absurd. It’s only trumped by The Necromancer being somehow unable to detect life, as if a standing corpse wasn’t curious enough and then Zel sparing the Goblin Lord and even NAMING him… because he has such a tender spot in his heart for goblin necromancers… give me a break. In this chapter you’ve managed to take Zel, a character whom I liked and then made his death a huge relief as the protracted melodrama of it all was finally allowed to conclude.

    I’m not sorry for the harshness of my comment as in this case I just have to call a spade a spade. I urge you to rewrite the chapter, cut the melodrama and scrap the Zel/GLord bonding nonsense. They are blood enemies and they should behave like it as nothing has happened before now to change their view on each other. They have oceans of the blood of each other’s peoples on their hands.

    Apart from that, thank you for the story so far.

    • Hi there. Different perspectives can make something good, great. Having said that, I’m gonna call you out on the fact that your comment isn’t simply harsh & blunt, but comes across as downright malicious. It practically oozes with bitterness and hostility. Not a particularly good stance to take on an author who writes such magnificent literature that is free for anyone to read. Perhaps you didn’t realise that your comment comes across as such. That’s ok, we all make mistakes. Regardless, I urge you (with the same intensity in which you’ve urged the author) to rewrite your comment so that it is objective and not so deliberately hurtful.

      Another quick fact I’d like to point out. Your opinion is by far a minority. Just have a read of all the other comments and how positively received this chapter has been. I myself find that this series has been so much more engaging and entertaining than virtually all the published works I’ve read throughout my life. So while you have some valid points, it is obvious that the chapter as it stands is an amazing end to Volume 4 and there is thus no need for the author to change it. Of course, she’s free to modify it as she see fits – perhaps something even better will result, in which case my mind will be completely blown away (even more so than it is now, which frankly would be an amazing feat). Regardless, the chapter as it stands is bloody amazing. You go pirateaba! =D

      • You’ve done an excellent job of not commenting on a single point that I’ve raised. Instead you’re manufacturing outrage on the behalf of someone else who could put forward her own opinion if she were inclined to do so. As for my opinion being in the minority, who cares? It’s more productive to read some criticism from time to time than endless, fawning praise.

    • Reiss was there. He actually tried to fight Zel, although he ultimately lost; yes, he tried to sneak up on him and kill him, but he put his own life at risk in the process.

      The Necromancer did no such thing. He waited until he was absolutely certain Zel wouldn’t be able to do a thing to him, then he teleported in and killed him. Then he continued doing it, even after both he and Reiss thought Zel was dead. Reiss is a coward; Az’kerash is a *shameless* coward.

      The difference might not mean a lot to us, but it obviously meant a lot to the Goblin Lord (who, remember, also hates Az’kerash and may not be rational about anything involving him).

      • “Reiss was there. He actually tried to fight Zel, although he ultimately lost; yes, he tried to sneak up on him and kill him, but he put his own life at risk in the process.”

        The moment the Goblin Lord tried to stab Zel in the back while he was grappling with one of the Necromancer’s minions is no better than what that Necromancer himself did. Also you’re forgetting all the times throughout the battle that the Goblin Lord zapped people to death from behind the lines and sent exploding zombie children forward to kill and maim. Of course he probably views himself in a more favorable light but why would Zel Shivertail care about his delusions?

    • Hello there, I’m here to give my answers and speculations about your critiques. They are perfectly sound and honestly all very reasonable, however I think I can motivate the why this end of the volume was very well thought instead. Now, of course I’m not the author so my answers could not be 100% true, but this is what I think.
      Your first criticism is honestly not very truthful. The Goblin lord never talked about honor and treachery. In fact goblins fight use any method available, as long as it’s “goblin” (meaning it follows some certain rules, like not using dead children corpses as bombs, but I will get to it). What he says is that Azkerash and he himself were cowardly in killing him. He did not say that being coward is a fault, just that it is not a good way to die for a warrior like Zel in that way, and since we know he’s a clever goblin he probably recognised his own cowardice.
      As for the necromancer not being able to detect life… well, we don’t know. He was probably confident he did not need a [detect life] spell, and sure as hell he can’t sense life everytime, or he would be kind of OP given the implications of that. He surely underestimated Zel’s vitality, and deemed it overkill. That was unexpected from Azkerash, such a clever and careful person… however the joy of killing the major enemy in his life probably eased him up and lifted a lot of pressure he built until that point. In fact, it is a common occurence to make such mistakes when these conditions verify.
      Then we get to Zel sparing the Goblin Lord’s life. Well, Zel could not move from his spot. If the goblin lord wanted he could have killed him easily with a deathbolt. He did not, instead he got closer and told him that he was sorry. That Zel’s was not an honorable death and he admitted that he and the Necromancer were cowards. Zel grabbed his throat. He thought of killing him, but Zel has many qualities. He is stubbornly honorable, and very inclusive towards other races. He looked at the goblin lords’ eyes and saw a person that was sorry for his death. Also, killing the goblin lord at that point was not honorable: again, Reiss went there only to say he was sorry. If you think that that is not a reasonable excuse for sparing an enemy like the goblin lord, I agree with you, but we are not Zel, the Shield of Drakes, an old man that made history.
      Then they begin to talk, and the goblin lord is kind again. Zel asks his name, gets to know he has none. A good name sparks in his mind: Reiss. Zel does not say that the goblin lord is like the son he never had. He just gives him a name. Why not? The goblin lord was now a person in Zel’s eyes, not a murderous enemy, and he deserved a name. Reiss, a proper drake name. What is the problem with this? The dialogue is properly built and makes sense.
      Finally, Reiss promise to kill the Necromancer. Do you realise how much he hates the Necromancer? It happened off screen but IT IS OBVIOUS that the Necromancer made him use the children bodies, or do you really think he used them willingly? Do you remember the talk with the Necromancer after the battle with the two drakes armies? The Necromancer told him that his tactics were wrong because he did not want to mix exploding undead with other living goblins. He did not want it because he did not want to kill other goblins himself.
      And do you remember the talk with the goblin Lord who served the goblin King? He told him that he was using only dead warriors who were ok with their corpses being used, not children. So it is safe to assume the Necromancer made him do this, a thing that he himself reputed not-goblin. And we know how much goblins care about being goblin.

      I hope this clarified your issues with this ending.

    • I know I am late to the party. I am reading this story now for the first time. I enjoy the story and understand the need for Zel to go out in an epic fight, however I feel the fight was drawn out too much form to enjoy. Zel is too overpowered and that doesn’t follow from what we know so far. It was just established that the powerful Gobling King died from an arrow to the eye. So even if you have superpowers, destroying your brain means the end.
      But here half of Zel’s head has been destroyed and he still lives. It was not necessary for showing Zel’s greatness, it just pulled me out of the story. And I feel disappointed about the Necromancer, and weirded out about the final conversation between Zel and the Goblin Lord.

      So for me it didn’t work out unfortunately.

  19. The way the story ended was quite well and fitting for someone legendary like Zel. Something I seldom see in stories these days.

    But I still have to gripe about how sorely disappointed I am at Askerash’s mental capabilities here.
    For someone who have possibly lived for hundreds of years, a genius, indifferent to emotions and death, even experienced death before,faced off a dragon and might possibly win. Yet, he still became stupidly afraid to simply just fire a few more death spells at Zel when he is so weak to the point of laying on ground dying or even let someone else finished the job then and there or just simply to make sure his enemy is truly dead. Given he himself is a good example of that.

    But no, he had to let his goblin apprentice and possibly the weakest minion deal with the body instead. Because efficiency and pragmatism worked that way.
    It just simply felt like he had just been forced to pick up the idiot ball just to let the plot progress a bit to the more favorable end.

    • I said all this because it felt disrespectful for Zel’s nemesis to not finish him off properly.
      And just run away from him.
      And I thought better of the necromancer too.

      All for Zel to die in the end anyway. Only for goblin lord to have a chat with him and gain a name. Only for Zel’s dead body to announced to the world.

      I like the way it ended at least and possibly helped progress the plot faster too. But still a gaping flaw to gripe about because of how cowardly stupid it was to get there in the end.

  20. Oh Zel. I wonder at his relationship with Sserys – naming Reiss after Sserys’ never-born son, and calling him ‘Wings of my Heart’. Either way, he is hopefully reunited with his loved ones past and and left an incredible legacy upon the world. Farewell Zel, you will be missed.

    • Right? I stan for Zel being a part of the LGBTQ Community! (I used stan correctly right?)

      Er, if people are offended by that, I’m sorry. I’m not trying to disrespect the LGBTQ community, or Zel, it’s just that if Zel was gay or bi, I’d be happy.

      Wait, did that make it worse…?

  21. Amazing chapter! I feel like this is a story i will definitely revisit over and over to reread again and again. Thanks for the amazing work. And:
    I feel like Zel has a skill that just lets him continue fighting no matter how much damage he takes as long as there is continued aggression. I mean he wouldn’t die until all his enemies left and he was able to peacefully rest. It fits his whole character as well, the whole I will never fall and my enemy will not break me.

  22. I only realized why this fucked me up so badly hours after reading the chapter–You monster, you killed one of my favourite characters on my birthday. ._.

  23. I just can´t see how Teriarch believes he is disadvantaged when it comes to fighting Perril Chandelier. From what I have just read a Drake [General] level lets say 60, using Niers as a mark, tanked the attacks of his five Chosen and I counted seven spells casted by The Necromancer, using his Skills and the single greatest Artifact of the Drakes.

    What kind of power is this bitch hiding that makes our Dragon so afraid? Maybe the secret of the Walled Cities? Maybe an Undead Dragon that is of limited use? Maybe a song by Luis Miguel?

    I want to know! Because Teriarch has every flag of dying for Magnolia or Ryoka.

    • I strongly suspect that Zel had a skill that allowed him to survive an arbitrary amount of damage for a certain length of time or until a certain condition was met.

    • He mentioned the necromancer has many artefacts, I’m guessing a few are enough to drop a dragon, why he wouldn’t use one in conjunction with his chosen is beyond me.

  24. After rereading Zels final speech, I wonder if he and sserys were lovers referring to him as “wings of my heart” got me thinking.

  25. This volume was really dark, but it definitely progressed and strengthened the setting and many less developed characters. I quite wonder how the Goblin Lord will follow his promise of revenge, and I liked the last scene of this chapter very much. And I am still waiting for the Titan, Niers Astoragon, to meet Erin.

    You’ve developed such an awesome story with so many relatable, realistic characters, and most of them are not even human. Volume 5 is going to be interesting.

  26. “There was no light in his eyes. The Goblin Lord wanted to cry out. Treachery! He had attacked from behind! But that was how Goblins fought. And yet the Necromancer…”

    I really like this chapter. It’s hitting me in the feels in all the right places.

    But what is this line? After I read this I though, ‘huh?’ I don’t have a problem with the interpretation that Reiss is distraught that Az’K is seemingly pulling a deus ex machina since they are technically enemies.In that light, it makes sense that Reiss and Zel would even bond a bit since they both hate Az. But this line sounds weird in that Reiss had a problem specifically with ‘how’ Az attacked from behind. It’s even in the text itself that it sounds like the thought wasn’t really complete. It’s as if someone made a mistake and just tried to gloss it over with a ‘anyways…’ (move on with rest of sentence). That’s my only gripe. Thx for the chap.

  27. This chapter just humanised the Goblin Lord as an actual person with a name.

    For all the readers.

    Like Erin has been trying to do with her Goblin’s.

    No way will Reiss ever die now except for old age.

    The Necromancer can die though. And will.

  28. Actually, here’s to me hoping the Queen of the Free Antinium performs the Rite of Anastasa (I totally got that wrong but I’m on mobile) tovbring back Zel and get an ally.

  29. I am mourning for Zel and hope he does get to see Sserys (sp?) again as it does sound like he is the love of Zel’s life. I hate losing him although I appreciate that he went down fighting. The story is as always good but it’s getting really heavy, almost too much so. Unfortunately I don’t imagine it will lighten up anytime soon given the current happenings. I am okay without stories not being all sunshine and rainbows, I understand the need for strife and growth, but I also want to be able to be happy and enjoy the story. Like I said though, it is a good story, I will keep reading and looking for some light at the end of the tunnel.

  30. Tbh, did not expect that Zel would die… I read a lot of books and how you set up his story and the events I was sure he would survive this. Sadly I was wrong and Zel died fighting. But fuck this story is getting heavy maybe a bit too heavy. I miss the early days in the inn… Now I look and I only see death and war in the future and nothing can stop the wheels of time turning. It is scary how well written this is. Still, 3 vols for now to go and I am so so scared…

    • I agree with you. Zel was one of the very finest developed of the supporting cast, and is a painful loss. I had hopes he would find new love in Lyonette, perhaps, but even if not, his relationships with Erin, Ryoka and others were so deftly drawn. I felt like Az’kerash and his extraordinarily evil minions bring nothing to the overall story. Really dreading more prolonged chapters of war and horrors. I took far longer on this volume overall than the prior ones, for this reason. I’m just not happy with the direction. The finest chapters in this volume were at the Inn, and mostly things Erin initiated. Great writing throughout, of course.

  31. Why didn’t Magnolia message Teriarch and told him the Necromancer had gotten personally involved? That could have broken up that bone wall.

  32. This story is amazing. I have been using almost all of my free time in the last month just reading this, reading around a book a week.

    While reading things I usually note down potential minor misspellings and such, as well as commentary (I have read a lot of fancition (not that kind(yes, specifying this is necessary) and its a habit I got from there), so I will comment my thoughts while reading (so far) as well as any potential misspellings I have found so far.

    I love Erin, she is so disarmingly honest.
    I had really thought the runner would manage to save some of her would-be friends in the last second, that’s not to be I suppose. (at this point I did not remember Ryoka’s name)
    It’s a bit of a cheat that through levelling they can get unbreakable will when she has it through merit.
    Poor Toren, I hope Eren gives him a hobby or something.
    oh no, Toren! Please go back to her :(
    I love Toren, I hope Erin does something nice for him eventually, like give him a nice sword.
    Rags is either going to be the first goblin to decide to make Goblins join other civilizations, or be the next goblin king.
    I hope Erin treats Toren like a friend every now and then, though based on what I see it doesn’t look like it.
    Poor Toren, he just wants to kill things.
    oh no, he snapped, he wants to be free, and now Erin is in trouble because of her not realising he was a person.
    “Why did the Goblin army cross the road? Quite literally to get to the other side.”, that is such a funny joke because of how unfunny it is XD
    Considering Erin’s perspective comments on how pretty girls are, I am starting to think she is into girls. Maybe. That’d be cool.
    There men/women…the fates? No gifts for her soul, something like the devil? (My not so articulate commentary on the solstice event)
    The wild hunt in Ryoka’s case? (here too)
    So beast tamer stacks with emperor, though emperor is not empowered by beast tamer. (I love that interaction)
    Poor Bunkr, he had just become a knight :( (I am still sad about this)
    Is it just me or is Erin telling Ryoka to leave, even for a day, a bit strange? It seemed a bit out of character to me, but maybe the letter had something interesting in it. (Then again I am not good at people)
    I love how consistent drake racism towards lizard people is. (I love how you show the different races having different natures, it just feels so…real)
    “average unladen Swallow, European or otherwise” :)
    I honestly thought there would be a tiny chance the anthium would begin worshipping Erin of all people when pawn became an acolyte, that would have been funny. (this was a thought I had early on but wrote down later)

    I wonder what will happen with Ryoka later.
    oh, also, I love how you manage to make constantly new and interesting characters and situations. I love Tom, I love the last light, I love most of, if not all of your characters (I can’t think of any I actively dislike the characterisation of, sure that Wistram noble-boy wasn’t particularly interesting, but that’s the closest I get to finding a character whose characterization I dislike)

    Here are the potential minor misspellings and such I have found so far, sorted by chapter (and hopefully I haven’t accidentally placed any under the wrong chapter), do be aware that I could have made a mistake, while I am pretty sure I understand when to use an apostrophe, I will willingly admit that I am no linguist.
    ” but not hard as Ryoka ” -> ” but not as hard as Ryoka ”
    “she her a familia” -> “she heard a familia”
    “you sent adventurers” -> “you send adventurers”
    “If kept playing maybe I’d be around 2400 righ” -> “If I kept playing maybe I’d be around 2400 righ”
    “longbows and shortbow, but the D” -> “longbows and shortbows, but the D”
    “of the adventurer’s light.” -> “of the adventurers’ light.”
    “Her approached Ryoka, and she tense” -> “He approached Ryoka, and she tense”
    “seem to know to react.” -> “seem to know how to react.”
    needed as a wet kitchen f
    “o find out way back, ” -> “o find our way back, ”
    “s they readied their spell.” -> “s they readied their spells.”
    ” separated by Sostrom when the ” -> ” separated from Sostrom when the ”
    “dged to one site and raised his staf” -> “dged to one side and raised his staf”
    ” hundred if the needed ” -> ” hundred if they needed ”
    “was it mistresses’” -> “was it mistress’s”
    ” because two the Antinium were ” -> ” because two of the Antinium were ”
    “a could heard growling a” -> “a could hear growling a”
    “looked expensive as it was deadly. Or maybe it wa” -> “looked as expensive as it was deadly. Or maybe it wa”
    “Olesm shook his head she walked back over to the tree. ” -> “Olesm shook his head as she walked back over to the tree. ”
    “see an Elf—half-e” -> “see a Elf—half-e”
    “stayed as one of world’s greatest an” -> “stayed as one of the world’s greatest an”
    “out run” -> “outrun”
    “e up empty-handed often as ” -> “e up empty-handed as often as ” or “e up empty-handed more often as ”
    “rd lodged in one of the Goblin’s ” -> “rd lodged in one of the Goblins’ ”
    “than other cities, except for maybe the Walled Cities. C” -> “than in other cities, except for maybe the Walled Cities. C”
    he’d been kicked out his Hive, ” -> ” he’d been kicked out of his Hive, “”
    “She is close to royalty as this land ha” -> “She is as close to royalty as this land ha”
    “own into a mere words.” -> “own into mere words.”
    ” loudly Toren slipped in the ” -> ” loudly when Toren slipped in the ”
    ” women were among students and t” -> ” women were among the students and t”
    “early as vibrant as Ceria. She h” -> “early as vibrant as Ceria’s. She h”
    “flowers I’ve never seen before. ” -> “flowers I’ve never smelled before. “,
    “her neck in second.” -> “her neck in a second.” or “her neck in seconds.”
    “sound as thei” -> sounds as thei””
    “, but that didn’t meant they cou” -> “, but that didn’t mean they cou”
    “h-pitched screams, and then horn calls.” -> “h-pitched screams, and then a horn calls.”
    “now of it’s shadowy concealment—looks at M” -> “now of its shadowy concealment—looks at M”
    “had belong to their ” -> “had belonged to their ”
    “moment. If they’re boring they’re good—they should ” -> “moment. If they’re boring they’re not good—they should ”
    “student’s minds, and they began” -> “students’ minds, and they began”
    “I shouldn’t worry about tha” could be “I wouldn’t worry about tha”
    “the half-Elves spellcasters back in ” -> “the half-Elf spellcasters back in ”
    “e as he thought deep thought.” -> “e as he thought deep thoughts.”
    “and trip up the rest.” -> “and tripped up the rest.”
    “head as was intent as he stared at her. Rag” -> “head was intent as he stared at her. Rag”
    “presence of the armory herself baffled her.” -> “presence of the armory itself baffled her.”
    “and level if Tremborag was ” may be “and level it if Tremborag was ” but it may also just be actual leveling.
    ” It was surprise visit, b” – “at was the Humans’ problem.”
    “, and in the warrior’s cas” -> “, and in the warriors’ cas”
    “, or just sent a bunch of infantry” -> “, or just send a bunch of infantry”
    “They villagers wandered amo” -> “The villagers wandered amo”
    “despite Rags shouting.” -> “despite Rags’ shouting.”
    ” in Rags head, ” -> ” in Rags’s head, ”
    “not wait for a” -> “not wait for a”
    ” raise your” -> ” raise your”
    “mage’s economy, and that by” -> “mages’ economy, and that by”
    “Golem’s presence, but—I kn” -> “Golems’ presence, but—I kn”
    “Illphres’ eyes.” -> “Illphres’s eyes.”
    “while you were away.” -> “while I were away.”
    “departure was alarming as it w” -> “departure was as alarming as it w”
    “other’s expressions, but t” -> “others’ expressions, but t”
    “practically jumping for jo” -> “practically jumping in jo”
    “But if are to ask him…do ” -> “But if you are to ask him…do ”
    “public setting you need no” -> “a public setting you need no”
    “that was Flos’.” -> “that was Flos’s.”
    ” was worse of all.” -> ” was worst of all.”
    ” being a train guard wasn’t bad—it ” -> ” being a train guard was bad—it ”
    “back to the head ” -> “back to the head ”
    “was now Flos choose to speak. ” -> “was now Flos chose to speak. ”
    “more interested Drake construction practices than ” -> “more interested in Drake construction practices than ”
    “did he deliver to Flos.” -> “did he deliver it to Flos.”
    ” it fell to earth.” -> ” it fell to the earth.”
    ” But there was difference between pins and bodies crushed, turned t”, I am not sure
    “one of Mars’ lies, ” -> “one of Mars’s lies, ”
    “] now the shock had ended.” -> “] now that the shock had ended.”
    “s and barely a handful of Hives. T” -> “s and barely have a handful of Hives. T”
    “. This our only hope, Klbkch. I” -> “. This is our only hope, Klbkch. I”
    “the Drake’s buildings, and ” -> “the Drakes’ buildings, and ”
    “k of the soups effects that he w” -> “k of the soup’s effects that he w”
    “As skeleton, he ” -> “As a skeleton, he ”
    “as a good as one. ” -> “as good as one. ”
    “was person unto itself. ” -> “was a person unto itself. ”
    “suggest. She hated nec” -> “suggest it. She hated nec”
    “nd was busying appearing and disappearing ” -> “nd was busy appearing and disappearing ”
    “in army. But I had to leav” -> “in the army. But I had to leav”
    “an ever warier look, but n” -> “an even warier look, but n”
    “group of Soldier. He pointed.” -> “group of Soldiers. He pointed.”
    “The Soldier, who had no voice. ” -> “The Soldiers, who had no voice. ”
    “eased now the order of comma” -> “eased now that the order of comma”
    “could be so high. Th” -> “could be too high. Th”
    ” on the other’s face” -> ” on the others’ face”
    “before using. Let’s ” -> “before using it. Let’s ”
    “appeared in the center of the Dullahans ” -> “appeared in the center of the Dullahans’ ”
    “g—although they believe in gods. B” -> “g—although they don’t believe in gods. B”
    “body was deep and huge” -> “body’s voice was deep and huge”
    ” of her customer’s large appetites.” -> ” of her customers’ large appetites.”
    “on his body sitting and staring at her” -> “on his body was sitting and staring at her”
    “empire’s about collapse. ” -> “empire’s about to collapse. ”
    “and burn it to pieces. The adventurers h” -> “and burned it to pieces. The adventurers h”
    “with deepest apologies and ” -> “with their deepest apologies and ” although it might be fine as it is.
    “only wounded, not the dead—t” -> “only wounded, not killed—t”
    “Human , brought” -> “Human, brought”
    “l send to you to Izril so you can ” -> “l send you to Izril so you can ”
    “d freezing then in place.” -> “d freezing them in place.”
    “e two adventurer’ plates, ” -> “e two adventurers’ plates, ”
    ” for all people surround” -> ” for all the people surround”
    “Rags’ tribe? Pyrite had” -> “Rags’s tribe? Pyrite had”
    “e entire fifth season Red vs Blue that ” -> “e entire fifth season of Red vs Blue that ”
    “I’m real as you are, Tom. ” -> “I’m as real as you are, Tom. ”
    “on my friend’s faces. The conf” “on my friends’ faces. The conf”
    “the Demon’s advance. Nereshal flicks his” -> “the Demons’ advance. Nereshal flicks his”
    “the disbelief on the Demon’s ” -> “the disbelief on the Demons’ ”
    ” in, part of me still amazed everything is happening. ” -> ” in, part of me is still amazed everything is happening. ”
    “, what do we have here?”” -> “, what do we have here?””
    “connection that told him he was her greater.” -> “connection that told her he was her greater.”
    “her lands rhythmically an” -> “her hands rhythmically an”
    “and them embraced him. T” -> “and then embraced him. T”
    “, but nevertheless possessed of thorns.” -> “, but nevertheless possessed thorns.” or “, but nevertheless in possession of thorns.”
    ” beat on, talking about” could be ” beat up, talking about”
    ” of the Goblin Lords’ ” -> ” of the Goblin Lord’s ”
    “. Now the Drakes lines were ” -> “. Now the Drakes’ lines were ”
    ” the Human’s only claim to ” -> ” the Humans’ only claim to ”
    “Human’s comeback however” -> “Humans’ comeback however
    “the Goblin’s progress.” -> “the Goblins’ progress.”
    ” the Human’s arrival and ” -> ” the Humans’ arrival and ”
    “his son’s beds rather” -> “his sons’ beds rather”
    “, curses, metal attack spells” -> “, curses, mental attack spells”
    ” from the Goblin’s chanting vanish. ” -> ” from the Goblins’ chanting vanish. ”
    ” the Human’s lines,” -> ” the Humans’ lines,”
    “d the Humans lines began to bu” -> “d the Humans’ lines began to bu” or “d the Human lines began to bu”
    “into the back of it’s ” -> “into the back of its ”
    “enter was far, larger t” -> “enter was far larger t”

    Thank you for writing this story, I love Erin, I love Ryoka, I love how Reinhart finally got into a situation that backfired on her, I love how you are not afraid of killing characters, how there are real heroes and villains in this world but also real people, and how you manage to keep the world feeling real without making it depressing and keeping that magic it had at the start through it all.
    You have made a world that is vast, interesting, fascinating, intriguing and incredibly incredibly fun to read about.
    I was happy that you sold the books on amazon kindle and have bought them there, even though I just keep reading them for free here, being able to give a little bit of money for it is great.

    Thanks again for writing, and I hope you have an awesome day!

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